coil

http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/7961/coilcopyfb0.jpg

the blue is the spirit, the red is the physical. this is them coiled together.

I like this a lot. I like the empty space in this because it lets me focus more on the "coil". I don't know if I like those different shades of lines in the back. It's good that you have them, but I think there're just a bit too many. Otherwise, I like it. :D

I like it, the colors blend well and it almost looks like a soft painting. The glow is done well too... maybe something a little different with the background though?

Nice shapes, nice lighting, wicked idea. I like your paintings, they're slightly more creative then alot of abstract art i see. That's nice.

But, on this peice, you should add some light where they "fuse" or, are just near eachother, and try working on smoother, more flowing edges. And with your colour, if yo'ure using alot of light, there generally will only be alot of saturation further away from the light.

but that's pretty minor, it just sounds really critical :p, it's the ideas that count the most. Good job, as usual. Keep it up man!

why the hell is it so big? i can't see it all!

Why does the size matter? I really love this piece and the philosophy behind it. Your painting skillzorz pwn my eyezor.

size matters because when i can't see the whole thing (and i would like to) i can't form an opinion of the piece. that's what matters about size.


maybe send me a resized version? :D

clean, simple, pure. its great art. kudos!

thanks everyone! dale, thanks for all those tips man. ill keep them in mind for the next one.

http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/1...alfsizetm4.jpg

heres it at half size.

That's better man. You can take it all in now, even the background with the straight lines :) Looks alot smoother aswell. Nice one :) I await the next peice!

ahhhh much better! :D I can see it all now. I like everything about it except one thing. Like HostilePenguin said, the black lines are great, but i think there are a few too many...it makes it appear as if you've tried too hard to make it glow. Personally I'd love to see the coils on a pure black background. but maybe you've already tried that! :D you know best! swell job, keep em coming.