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my mates got married the other day, and they wanted me to make a little intro thing for the start of there video, so i made this (+a load of other stuff, which is alright)
http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/821/logocopy5yv6.png
thoughts/suggestions/criticisms? please
p.s. i'm still touching it up. so dont worry about the untidy bits :)
you made them a logo O-o that seems a tad... odd to me... what are they? Buisnesspeoples... it might have been better to do a drawing or digital picture of sorts...
oh yeah fix the heart in the middle... or get rid of it all together, doesnt look right to me.
its for there video.... not a business logo
I like it! I don't know how you wanna fix those lines, but I suggest you trace them with the pen tool, to get a perfect result!
thx dude
i'm having some trouble with the lines tbh. curves are bloody hard :(
especially on the bottom right side
any tips? would be fab as i want to get this right for a change :)
oh yeah, any ideas whats wrong with the heart? coz i cant see anything wrong on it :confused:
Just keep trying till you get it right! I don't think there's anything wrong with the heart. Keep it.
thx dude :)
think i'll have to get creative and try and figure a way of getting them right
psp had a brilliant curving tool..... why couldnt PS pick up on it:mad:
What's wrong with Photoshop's pen tool? :S Alt+click on the latest anchar point to prevent it from creating an ugly curve to the next anchar point. Or maybe you know that, sorry. :P
of course i did ^^
just found a tut on it 20 mins ago
its all looking better already
Sweet! Post it here when you've fixed the lines. :)
Right...
i think i've sorted out the lines, but i'm not all that sure
+ i've changed lots other small things
+i've altered the middle bit a bit
http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/2743/logocopy9kf0.png
any suggestions will be good. be honest as this needs to be good :)
The lines still aren't perfectly shaped. And I'd say remove the blurry parts. And why is the font pixelated? Go through it again till everything looks PERFECT! ;)
balls
i'm guessing u have a big monitor, coz i couldnt see the pixleated lines on the .png image
thx dude
Can't wait to see the fixed version. Love the design itself though! ;)
Looks very cool.
About the quality issues, if you can, I'd say redo the whole thing. Use what you have now as a guide, go over it with the pen tool, and create new layers to stroke and fill, rather than touching up what you have now (I'm assuming). Then you can just hide/delete the guide when you're done, with the result perfect. If you run into trouble, we can help.
hmm
well i'll continue fixing it tonight, but if it doesnt work i'll do as jsoosiah said
i aint looking forward to doing it all again though :(
I like it, nicely put together :)
thx dude
well, here it is. totally re-done
http://img64.imageshack.us/img64/5669/logocopy18df2.png
thoughts?
It still isn't perfect...xD
Sorry....lol
Quality's a lot better, but some lines aren't perfectly curved. If you used the pen tool properly you shouldn't have gotten that... If you still have the paths, then it should be an easy fix, it'll be hell if not though. As for those shadows, they're pretty distracting and take away from the piece right now, try like a soft light blending mode, or something else with lowered opacity. Keep going, this has awesome potential.
cheers guys
i'll go over the shadows again tomoz
as for the paths, there all gone.
but tbh, i'm fairly happy with them, even though i can see the imperfections. so i'll leave them alone
might make a few highlights too
Update: i've shown it to my m8s, and she loves it, and he thinks i've got way too much time on my hands ^^
anyway, i may give it 1 last going over tomoz, and see if i can improve the lines a bit :)
