Oh noes entry

http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/7...unshinedt5.jpg
My entry for Aotw 4. any comments?

edited colors:
http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/4...nshine2nj7.jpg

moved text:
http://img243.imageshack.us/img243/8...unshinefm2.jpg

:o
that look amazing!!
nice 1

Kinda boring with only that sepia tone. :( Nice idea, but you should work more with color, or else the viewer will lose interest pretty quick. Maybe the planet is a liiiitle bit too contrasted - it's hard to make out the texture.

But everything else looks great. :]

Wow that's really nice looking :) The colours however, are not too nice looking... They just make it look dull. I think the planet takes up a little too much room also :) The yellowey brown colour = bleugh >.<

i personnaly think the colours look spot on
but thats probably just my preference

is it all from scratch, or stock with effects? either way, nice

Its all from scratch, just the planet texture i got from google maps or whatever it is.
I'll mess around with the colors. maybe. I just thought those colors looked nice, i didnt want to overdo it so i guess i underdo-ed(did) it.
and the planet i kinda ment to be contrasted to emphasize the sunshine thingy. But yeah. thanks for the comments ^^ ill post the edited one sometime. xD

edit:
http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/4...nshine2nj7.jpg well. better?

in my opinion you completly fucked up work with font. idk its special or not, but it looks ugly

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Originally Posted by CuBa

in my opinion you completly fucked up work with font. idk its special or not, but it looks ugly

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anything else? thats not a real comment yet.
I was pretty surprised that nobody thought the text sucked before you ^^

... i did, forgot to mention ^^ lawl

and by the colours, i menat, a colour balance layer doesn't look good...

It's really nice and I love the effects. But coming back to what Rabies said I dont like the sepiaish colour scheme. I think this would benefit multiple vibrant colours. Other than that it's awesome.

Indeed, the text is weak. Doesn't display the level of quality of everything else.

And then about the colors, I agree with the general opinion. The update's a nice improvement there.

http://img243.imageshack.us/img243/8...unshinefm2.jpg
I moved the text to the corner, im not gonna start doing anything fancy on the text, atleast right now, im going to zZzzzZzzleep.

Who the hell cares about a fucking text?! :P Colors are looking better now. :]

It looks kinda grungy...and just kind of flat.

It dosen't haven't much depth.

The quality is just isn't up to par... sorry mate. :)