something simple

something simple i made. thoughts?
http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/1728/eyeps8.jpg

Ok, i neeed to change the size. but appart from that?

i like what you are going for. i do think, however, that the "contact" is off angle from the eye. its like the woman is looking slightly to the right but the contact is facing strait forward. know what i mean. i think if you transform with a little distortion it would be a lot better. if you had put this together earlier, you probably could have entered it into SOTW sci-fi. nice.

cool idea, it looks good.. do it with the both eyes and add some effects on her skin, can become a nice sig^^ gj :)

cheers guys
i'll have a quick fiddle with it now

hmm... the original model image was on a bit of a tilt, so its quite hard to get this right... thoughts?
http://img361.imageshack.us/img361/4153/eye2wy1.jpg

I think the metal iris and pupil should be proportionate to the real one, know what I mean?....

Yea they should be the same size. Also, for some reason the face kinda looks funny to me, I think it's that the metal eye isn't still lined up yet or something, idk.

It's a nice concept, just needs a little work.

i did make it a bit smaller than the original iris. maybe thats throwing me off...
k, i'll hae another go

i cant seem to get the red to glow realistically. any thoughts?
http://img264.imageshack.us/img264/801/eye3ed8.jpg

yeah, lose it.lol
Made you could blur and lower opacity but im still not sure what was wrong with it, why you cant get it.

right, last version. C&C pwease!!
http://img266.imageshack.us/img266/5861/eye4ex6.jpg

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Originally Posted by Etitan

yeah, lose it.lol
Made you could blur and lower opacity but im still not sure what was wrong with it, why you cant get it.

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oops, missed this post. i think i got it now mate. cheers :D

I like it...gj.

yea great job. Very original too

i like how it turned out good job and nice concept

Ah comparing the first post to your current one, This one is the shiz :P
Great job, good creativity

ta guys :D

nice :D I like it(wothout the glow) but I would made it smaller, gj :)

It's original that's for sure. Why is her edited eye grey?? isn't it supose to be white like her other eye. And the text sux.

its grey because its made of metal
and the text doesnt 'suck' its just not fancy

right, i've tried something with the text. personally, i hate it but i'll wait to hear your judgment. its ment to be a branding btw. 1 reason why i dont like it is coz i've wrecked her pretty face even more :(

oh, and i think i've cracked the glowing.

thoughts...
http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r280/manhos/eye5.jpg

I agree with you bub. If you just use a default fon like Arial or something like that, adn keep it simple, it would look professional, and not degrade the sig

i knew it!
ta :)

try adding a black layer with a red radial gradient over the eye then useing soft light or which ever one looks the best, that might give you you're glow...not sure about it though you might want to add another white shape directly over the eye and fill it with something at opacity 0% then add an outer glow as well....maybe that will work?

lol
i've actually done both those things here :D