tomstars new work!

Made on the 17/02/07

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Took me awhile aprox 20mins . Comments&Suggestions appreciated!

First off, the font really sucks heh
If I didn't know your username I'd read 'com'
you should keep out the 2 lines cause I don't really like them either.
and as for the kanji/katana/whatever, you haven't blended them in really well.

eh, is pretty good a bit hard to tell wats going on. hes rigth the font isnt good. I like the idea of the lines but noton this sig, it just doesnt look right. the bg is pretty interesting tho. with the render i would have just done a feather blending. the motion blur makes it too confusing and hard to see. keep at it.

Same as everybody else said, seems a liitle dark to me.

My thoughts?

Well some may disagree, but I like to spend more than 20 minutes making a sig. I can spend hours on a sig. Not always consecutive hours by all means, but I’ll start it, get it to a certain point, then leave it. Fiddle around with it here and there, then post it, and get some feedback for it.

Sometimes I return to right away to it, sometimes I’ll loose interest in it for a while, or even all together.

If you put more time into it, you’ll be more satisfied I think in the long run.

This sig is a bit dark for one thing. Maybe add a colour balance or two and see how that looks.

The text should go. As mentioned, I read it as “com” and not “Tom”. I need to post something about that one of these days for newcomers.

I think if you re-work your text, the lines you’ve added to the sig may work and look pretty good if things are aligned properly. I’ve seen it done before, and the results can be quite good.

I’d work on this one for a while and see what else you can come up with.

I love everything except the font

Too dark for my taste.

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Originally Posted by Raiko

First off, the font really sucks heh
If I didn't know your username I'd read 'com'
you should keep out the 2 lines cause I don't really like them either.
and as for the kanji/katana/whatever, you haven't blended them in really well.

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Exactly what Raiko said l thought it said Com nice try though dude

At first I went whoa and had to comment then i read the comments, I didnt even notice the text wasn't the clearist but The lines must stay.lol As for the darkness i think it works, definitely in the blending department. the only thing im not 100% supporting of that thick line on the left. lower the opacity so it looks like the others in the bg.

evrything looks good though the text needs to be improved. good try though

Thanks everyone ! I know messed up with the font & I'll try to fix that with my NEXT sig THANKS for pointing out the things that don't look good ;]