Gears Of War Sig

Meh, it looked better when I was making it. What do you guys think? I think it's kinda cloudy and bright.
http://www.likenota.com/gallery/data..._War_-_Dom.png

Idk if I like the swirl or not.
Its like there, but not there enough.
Just alright for me, still much above average, but not even close to your other sigs

Thanks for the feedback. I liked the swirl when I put it in there, but it got cloudy so it looks weird. I'm gonna give it another go with the same game and character but a different effect.

Here's a second one I just finished. I like this one MUCH better than the other one, but got angry because I realized a problem with the render I used AFTER I finished. There's a blackish dot over the eye. Couldn't fix it because I dunno how.

http://www.hostmyfile.info/ufiles/21...20Dom%20v2.png

Like a BAJILLION times better.
I'd use a moer uniformal text though. Something more like the one on your CS, but not necessarily the same one.

yea, i agree with you. I'll edit when I get back home.

EDIT

Here's the updated version:

http://www.hostmyfile.info/ufiles/21...0v2%282%29.png
grrrr it's a link instead of an image >_<

i like the first one though the second one looks so much better. and i agree with New001 about what he said about the text. though they look great.

thanks for the feedback

i'll ignore the first one... the second one makes me envious...

It's ok I suppose. Nothin special. :)

Same as i said about your other sig, its monotonal, that just kills it for me. That and the swirl.

Yea, the first one was horrible.

I think he could have worked the swirl by putting two more on the other side, each smaller than the previous but owell'.
Yeah the second one rox t00...and i see nothin really out of.....?......i have no crtique for you.lol

Ok so you like them lol
I like the idea for the swirls