Brother in Arms sig comment+rate

Here is my fourth sig with two outcome ready to be jugded and critizided (wrong spelled?) but leave a comment thx. i Present:
Half life2
First one without pattern
Second with pattern

http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u...denpattern.jpgVs http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u...ferdborder.jpg
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http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u...textremade.jpg
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the lighting is off. put that light source layer at the bottom right instead of the top left, because that's where the highlights on the stock are. it'll look a lot better after that.

Text...is it just me or is the "Brother" smaller than "In Arms". Text needs to be fixed. Maybe slide the "In Arms" closer to the right side of the sig.

You probably want "brother" bigger than "in arms", so that it equals out, and because it's more important in that expression. Furthermore, I would recommend changing the font - you probably want a faded/splattered font (DaFont - 1942 Report), to match the mood and time. I'd make it slightly smaller, and work on the lighting (the white blob in the second is...well...a blob).
As a last comment: I don't really like the pixellated shader thing you have going on in your sig, but that's just me, I take it.

-konfusion

Thx all

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the white blob in the second is...well...a blob

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it was also just made on 5 sec the light, course prg thought it was a good idea hehe

lol well having a light source is a good idea. out a the two i liek teh half life one better. the bg is better, and not as dark. I would probobly lower the pattern's opactiy on it a bit tho.

I don't like the pattern or the font. Improve the font (I even posted a link to a good font...), and take away that pattern, and it'll look much better ^^

-konfusion

I don't think you need a pattern on it.

The effect is crap, the pattern makes my eyes bleed, are you trying to make the glasses stand out? cause that's what you've done and if you intended to that then I'd have to say : well done, you made him look like a big nerd. Not that there's anything wrong with nerds but still though. 2/10.

i like it! the colors look very good. jsut add lighting and it´s VERY good to me.

Thx all for c&c sry you didnt like it Raiko?? little harsh though hehe

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Originally Posted by Raiko

The effect is crap, the pattern makes my eyes bleed, are you trying to make the glasses stand out? cause that's what you've done and if you intended to that then I'd have to say : well done, you made him look like a big nerd. Not that there's anything wrong with nerds but still though. 2/10.

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Well Raiko if you do think its that bad how bout a little bit advice on how to make it better. Instead of just saying it sucks in various ways and leaving them feeling sad with no understanding on how to improve. give them a little something to work on.

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Originally Posted by Daemon

Here is my fourth sig with two outcome ready to be jugded and critizided (wrong spelled?) but leave a comment thx. i Present:
Half life2
First one without pattern
Second with pattern

http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u...denpattern.jpgVs http://i171.photobucket.com/albums/u...ferdborder.jpg

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the effect on the sig is ok, but i think you've over used it a bit. maybe if you toned the effect down a bit on the main character, and remove where you've used it in other places... probably just leave it black really, it would look better imo

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Originally Posted by Raiko

The effect is crap, the pattern makes my eyes bleed, are you trying to make the glasses stand out? cause that's what you've done and if you intended to that then I'd have to say : well done, you made him look like a big nerd. Not that there's anything wrong with nerds but still though. 2/10.

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your sig kind of makes me wonder what right you have to comment on other peoples to be honest

thanks for backing me up and thx for comments