A Terrible Future

This is a pic i made didnt make the buildings but i did a lot of editing to them. made almost everythign else.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/52220305/
http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/7...nplanetzh6.jpg


And yea i know the quality is bad i saved it in PNG 24, jpeg everything and the quality just would not come out right.


CnC appriciated.

Anyone?

what are all the things floating around? its definitly a cool idea, and its carried out pretty well.
some of the brighter spots of smog could be dimmed down, and maybe add a fire or something, idk.

Ooo, very interesting. We're all gonna die from a smog attack! D=

it misses contrast, focus and a lightsource.
but you did nice work on the objects.

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Originally Posted by Henry

what are all the things floating around? its definitly a cool idea, and its carried out pretty well.
some of the brighter spots of smog could be dimmed down, and maybe add a fire or something, idk.

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The flying objects are like planes and things but its a little hard to tell. I never thought of adding a fire i might edit it and add a fire.

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Originally Posted by Falc0re

it misses contrast, focus and a lightsource.
but you did nice work on the objects.

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Yea, i had some problems with the focus. WIth the whole ligthsource i wanted it too look very dark, so it'd make it feel sader, and more terrible, but i should add some type of light underneath the smog or somethign your right about that.

Thanks for the CnC guys i really appriciate it, ill maybe edit it and repost later.

be sure to do this. this could look awesome with a few adjustments.

I like it, but it looks kind of 2d and out of perspective...

-konfusion

yeas it is a bit out of perspective 1. because i wnated to make it look weird. and 2 is because while making it i fuked up and hit a problem and i didn't want to start over so i had to edit it andit didn't turn out right but im too lazy to start over again. lol thats a mouthfull.

Alright i updated it and added fire and a lightsource, sharpened the whole picture 2 more times as well. Better?


http://img512.imageshack.us/img512/5...teditedmb5.jpg

better, but it still looks kind of flat....how about sky lights which are thrown from spotlights on the big round tower? they could reflect on the dusty sky to create the illusion of 3d.

If possible drop the flame thing on the left, It just doesnt go with the scheme to me

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Originally Posted by [PHXN] New001

If possible drop the flame thing on the left, It just doesnt go with the scheme to me

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I agree with you, id be cool to have a flame there but i can't pull it off.its just not working for me.

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Originally Posted by Falc0re

better, but it still looks kind of flat....how about sky lights which are thrown from spotlights on the big round tower? they could reflect on the dusty sky to create the illusion of 3d.

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I might try that, eitehr later tonite or tommoro i'll have anotehr updtae.

Sweet btw don't let all this CnC discourage you, It is a very good piece :D

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Originally Posted by [PHXN] New001

Sweet btw don't let all this CnC discourage you, It is a very good piece :D

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Thanks, i don't mind it, it just mean i need extra practice.