star wars sig

well this is my latest and favourite sig. it has also taken the most time to make. well i've made 3 versions so CnC please.

v1
http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p...nal400x125.png
v2
http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p...kin371x120.png
v3
http://i130.photobucket.com/albums/p...rtextsmall.png

and i know i've got 2 focal points but i was aiming for it to look like there is a dark side and light side thing going.

I've tried to do the "dark side/light side" thing too. I cant really say much other than work on blending the renders with the background. Also make the transition between dark to light smoother, now its just a line going down it. Good idea you got going.

thanks albran and VoodooGypsy and i'l try to fix the transition.

anyone else?

1.if your going to do dark vs light, u should have the rendersw facing each other


2.i think a clash of the colors in the center would look nice

3.im not sure if u know, but vader an anakin are technically the same person

Well this is by far your best yet. your bg is pretty good, and the border isn't bad as well. I think it just needs the renders to be blended a little more and then its a a good sig.

thanks PRG and BL4CKH4WK i was trying to make it look like he was having a struggle between the dark/light side.

anyone else?

Nice, but it seems like the dark side has a lot more space than the light. Also, the two sides seem to be separated by a line, so try to make that smoother. And as said before... renders need blending.

ok i'll try working on the transition and i'll blend the renders.

yes kemo. you should try and blend the renders. because surely you are able to do that, gosh........pathetic.

well ignoring the previous post, i would have to say i like version 2 the best.

like suggested above i think you should balance the sig out more, have the render's blended in with there backgrounds more so they don't look like they were just pasted there.

also work on your text a bit, download some different texts and experiment with those in your sig. sure it will look good mate.

other then that i love star wars so i like it :D

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Originally Posted by Todd_eastick

yes kemo. you should try and blend the renders. because surely you are able to do that, gosh........pathetic.

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Todd this forum isn't forum slamming people, it is for ppl to get better, and to get better they need constructive critisizm. Also whats even more pathetic than that is you bringing up an almost month old thread. Please don't bring old threads back up.

so please keep it clean and nice.