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text is too close together, also the letters/buttons need more space inbetween.
other than that its cool, the colors are a bit bright, but i like it.
maybe a gray/dark gray pattern in the back, instead of halftone?
Yeah i have the spacgin set to -140 by default lolz, forgot to change it for the content. I like the close buttons ^^
I was gona have some kinda lines in the background but i cba making a pattern, this and a floral pattern were the only ones ive made since I got my new computer so i just used it lolz =]
Your blurred out btw :O
im on teh friends?
Ja lol. I just put on people who I figure would have a decent site lulz.
The large text area needs more work, because it's just not visible enough to be used as a site.
Yeahh, imagshack resized it >.< And obv, there wouldnt be block text there
My computer crashed and I lost the layout, so im gona make another =]
I prefer this one
http://xs216.xs.to/xs216/07245/cmyk.jpg
oh yeah. That background is just until i can be bothered making my own. I took it off the 4impressions website.
v2 is awesome
colours are stunning, layout and text is perfect; the background is nifty.
i can actually suggest no further improvements.
I also like the colors, this is def a site i would look at if i found it. Nice job rob.
Is it only me who finds the "portfolio" annoying? light-on-light text never helped.
i like v2 alot more.
make a text page with the v2 layout?
ARGH
So fucking pissed off, I went out an left my computer on - didnt save this, and my fuckin sister turns my computer off
3hrs of fucking work down the drain - Ill try an redo it, but like.. I needed the layers
lolowned rob.
That is why you always save regularly.
Although the hsb one I was making got lost when illustrator crashed ._.
lolowned.
I had a new idea for a name dude
CMYuk. Whatcha think? =D
yeah and your logo could be
http://xs216.xs.to/xs216/07246/cmyk.png
but i'd also put some text on it saying UK in black and some kind of variation on the position but i couldn't be bothered..
lulz, I dont need a logo =/
The logo could just be the colors D: Ive kinda got the file back how I wanted it.. ill post a thing with text soon =]
COMPLETE WITH ABOUT PAGE
http://xs216.xs.to/xs216/07240/cmykpa.jpg
Yeah cba with links right now. The picture of me is only there to fill space, if clients see how young I am, they probs wouldnt employ me. Anyone think of any other space filler?
Oh and also the text is bs, again just to fill space with using l'ipsum. Oh and it says CMYuk, ive decided that name sucks, so im sticking with cmyk. Cba changing it.
And while I'm here, I'll just link to my topic ;P
I think I've already seen this one, anyway :/
GIMME CRIT NIGZ D:
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the text is horrible, i need to find a nicer font =/ its too blurry
colors are vibrant and attract the eye, which is good. The text in the about me section is close together so it's like reading one word. It's nice tho :)
And remember rob, unless it's flashed in, the text won't be anti-aliased...
orly?
Whats the best font to use? =/
YARLY
Nooo idea.
I like the second version that you showed. Structure is nice and obvious. I think the colors might still be alittle too bright. They really scream making it difficult to focus on any text you have.
Perhaps using a translucent background behind any text blocks to dull the background would enhance readability.
