renovation

er..CnC please?

renovation

to dark, otherwise good

too dark, too much negative space, the text just kills the render, and not enough contrast. good render however, but you should definatly make it feel more interesting.

Undertone got most of it. Just do what he said it'd be real good.

there's a lot of open space there you gotta fix that up i say minimize the size width to 415

thanks guys. time for some editting

EIDT:
http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/5...ovationlf2.png

Oh wow.. I like the updated one.. The text is bad though.. That would be the only thing I'd want to see changed or better.. ;)

Nice work! ;)

i would like to see the green be a little stronger... and that text still hurts the image.

changed the text. a little greener.
http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/1438/renovateor9.png

awesome, cant think of much else to improve right now.

Ye, I did that man. Nice work, it looks really nice. Keep up the good wooork ;)

The third version looks very nice, i like this work alot. Nice job.

cool
looka like a planet exploding :D