Ok peeps i know its a lil soon but i have been workin on it for at least an hour in a half. again ANY criticism is fine. oh yea 1 thing, ive been a lil IFFY about the border but i just took my chances anyways. if u can tell me what u think i should have done i will appreciate it AS ALWAYS. here it is....
i think it is pretty good, the border looks fine, the text fits pretty good, the only thing i would work on is making the render blend in a little better, i like the brushing also
7/10
03-17-2005, 09:47 PM
Cosmic
the Color is nice i like it.....like Toggles said "work on is making the render blend in a little better"...i like the BG also...just fix the render itself...then it would look better.
03-17-2005, 09:48 PM
MiNdFrEaK
u know what man, i swear i spent most of my time tryin to get that thing to blend really good. but i just couldnt get it to go man, so i just left it like that. plus the only thing that i had tried that made it better then that, seemed like the guy had no damn head. so....idk thanks for the post though.
03-17-2005, 09:49 PM
Illegalx17
border is fine, text is nice. a couple things. brushign is nice, but i think you over-did it a tad. render. . .ok, nice render, a couple things, blend it more please! also make him behind the border, and move the text up so its not over the border. if you want you can make the side and top of the render over the border and just teh bottom behind to add depth. very nice for a 3rd sig. 6.5/10
03-17-2005, 09:54 PM
Cosmic
Try umm...."Soft Light"....its nice if it isnt to DARK of a sig....
03-18-2005, 12:43 AM
Bradley
Ok. First things first, you spelled your name wrong. <_<
Secondly, for the blending of the image, try putting it on Luminosity and make sure it's below the color balance layer. Put the render behind the border as was mentioned by Illegal. Maybe try moving the render over more so there isn't as much open space in the middle.
03-18-2005, 12:47 AM
MiNdFrEaK
OMG!!!!! i feel like a dumbass, who the hell spells their name wrong!?!? wtf, i need sleep! wow, im givin up for a few days. lol. thanks for the tip hxc im still very much a noob.
03-18-2005, 02:54 AM
robgasm
the render is very strange and hard to see
btw where did you spell your name wrong? U-n-s-p-o-k-e-n on the first +second...
03-18-2005, 03:53 AM
MiNdFrEaK
eh, i had it mispelled on the second one before i fixed it up. but man im tellin u the render i swear i tried soo many things. so i just went with luminosity and dimmed the brightness and contrast, if i dimmed it anymore the head would be completely transparent. i would have a headless render. so.....idk i think i just messed up on that one. im not used to blending just yet. plus the only blending ive really ever done is with dark bg's.
03-18-2005, 01:48 PM
jerner
I quite like the color and the brushing looks fine, but it seems to turn into grunge to the right. The render fits well, but it shouldn't cover the border, so does the text :/ quite nice though, better then your earlier ones I think.
03-18-2005, 02:21 PM
rapidx
Text, border and render look good but i think that the "knight" u have is a bit big.. i mean that its width is big.. maybe its just me.... dunno :blink:
03-18-2005, 02:27 PM
Oblivion
I disagree the width is fine in my opinion, but thats me... It looks like you did some heavy bluring to his helmet, and shoulders. The new placement is good. Try adding a layer over the knight and gave small brushes on lower opacity go there, for more blending.
03-18-2005, 03:06 PM
tabloid
i put the render aside, cause obliv is right, it looks blurry, but i love it nonethe less. i cant stop looking at the background, great work.
03-19-2005, 12:28 AM
MiNdFrEaK
u know, i appreciate all u peeps inputs and tips. esp from tablodiz, someone who i think personally has one of the better lookin sigs ive seen (your second btw) how the writing is on the wall and whole dark creepy feeling i get from it everytime i look at it. and its funny u should say u cant stop looking at my bg, cause everytime i see that one sig i cant stop lookin at it lol.
