Assasin cReeD-- colorfull

Long time no sEE...

I was kinda bored and i found this assasin render, so i started workin on it...

it's 100% by me, i just used some filters and brushes, if i liked em i left em :D

anyway, here it is:
http://i13.tinypic.com/61u4nbp.jpg

C&C. ;D

Looks alright, could use a border.

Looks pretty good... Might look better with a boarder and a light source... But yeah all up it's alright

Hmm this isnt my cup of Tee.

It could use a border a better light source and the the text just doesent fit the render or the bg at all.

not very professional and i dont like the colors... i think you must add more darker colors...

professional ?? Define professional in this instance

I think the colors look fine. It just needs a border and some work on the text. I'm not sure if a light source will be needed since the sig has a vectorish pop art feel to it.

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Originally Posted by Drolaw

professional ?? Define professional in this instance

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What do you mean?

He means how is crozer's sig not very professional.

You see... I like the idea... but in my opinion the sig is not very professional... and maybe need more darker colors....

It's really clashy.

The lightened text in the middle kind of throws off the render, and the pixelated text to the left doesn't look like it belongs. Reduce some of the grungish-looking brushing, and try something more fluid, maybe experiment with some freeflow fractals, and some earthy, vibrant colors. Create a fractal that's flowy, maybe somewhat curvy, and have it curl up on both sides of the render, and possibly use a Gaussian Blur on Lighten to give it somewhat of a Glow. Try making it less wide also, that'll show some spotlight to the render.

Good luck, buddy.

ill tell you why its not professional. . . the background doesnt match the render at all... too much text which makes it look like a second focal point? yea and the text is bad too, no flow, its just all wild everywhere, and a horrible light source.

this render is definitely for abstract.