Abandoned pathway

I took this earlier today. CnC please.

http://fc03.deviantart.com/fs18/f/20...roksguitar.jpg

Good stuff! I don't see any problems.

The sky is too bright compared to the rest. And if you could get the sign a little sharper, it would give you a pretty good focal point.

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also maybe crop the foreground a little.
and make it smaller! ;o i can't hardly see it

I like it, and i can kinda follow fade the sky is a bit bright. But this is an awsome photo man.

k seriously, resize your photos. If its bigger in height, make the height no more than like 600. if its bigger in width, 800. Otherwise you cant tell whats going on on a 1024 screen =|

try removing the telephone pylon wires, or make them less visible at the top of the shot

this gives me the impression it was shot and given a purpose rather than actually just being.. so i don't like it, doesn't matter if it doens't, it just gives me that impression like

Crop it... either use the top 2/3 or the bottom 2/3... imo.

meh, Dont really worry about the size papa, It's good as is.

Nitpickers ;P

Heh Thanks guys. Ima go with Bfg on this one. I don't wanna crop it...I'm pretty happy with the way it is.


Btw did anyone understand deadloader's post? cause i have no clue.

i meant that it's emotionless and empty. haha

wrong bfg, the size is shit. It isnt anything if you cant see it - sure, print it off and hang it on a wall - then you can see what it is, but on a screen its like having a window infront of that picture that only lets you see 1/2 of it at one time :F

i like it its pretty good i dont see much wrong it fits on my screen i love it :)

Use a screen size higher then 1024x768 then.

1280x1024 mate.

Hows there no emotion in this?!

There's plenty...

haha yeah refer to my first post and then think about what i said.. it makes sense XD

Its beautiful

Thanks ppl :). Haha deadloader i still don;t know what you quite gettin at but Whatever works.

I think Stu's opinion is that the image looks too forced and set up. He obviously prefers more.. spontaneous shots or atleast those that look spontaneous. While there's nothing wrong with the shot itself as far as composition goes, it's just not his bag, baby.

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Originally Posted by rob

wrong bfg, the size is shit. It isnt anything if you cant see it - sure, print it off and hang it on a wall - then you can see what it is, but on a screen its like having a window infront of that picture that only lets you see 1/2 of it at one time :F

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exactly.

Ahh thanks for suming that up for me fade.

ANd @ jssoaih and rob: Flat out I'm sry but I'm not changing it. However. there is a smaller version on deviantart.

bfg, I dont have $200 to go and buy a new screen. Id spend it on other stuff anyway.

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Originally Posted by Fade

I think Stu's opinion is that the image looks too forced and set up. He obviously prefers more.. spontaneous shots or atleast those that look spontaneous. While there's nothing wrong with the shot itself as far as composition goes, it's just not his bag, baby.

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i wuv you fadeeee hahahahaha