please, only constructive comments - no rating whatsoever, that means if you think its bad say why to help me.
03-20-2005, 11:13 AM
-Kanji-
animation and X is original and very cool I think. Your bg seems so out of place though. Maybe change the blue color to somethin to match ur text a wee bit more. Possibly add a render? nice work.
03-20-2005, 11:26 AM
robgasm
any suggestions on the actual animation and words - thats where i thought something was missing you see...
03-20-2005, 11:31 AM
Bradley
I think when "exceed" appears, it's ends up being too close to the right border. Maybe you could also try fading right to the next word instead of having the downtime with a black sig in front of you, but I wouldn't know how you do that. :)
03-20-2005, 11:58 AM
robgasm
yeah, i knew it was a bit close but to change it and have the other text in the same position i would have to do it again ( its very hard to see wether the blur is in the same place)
03-20-2005, 12:05 PM
Berusadeankan
After it sais Deepblue, add like an "ray light`" effect on the X.. know what i mean?
03-20-2005, 12:22 PM
robgasm
umm... i think so, like a glow on it?
03-20-2005, 12:36 PM
Berusadeankan
yeah, try it out.. Wana se the effect =)
03-20-2005, 12:39 PM
robgasm
ok, maybe in an hour or two, im too lazy to do it now..
[edit] heres your glow, may not have done to the best of my ability but im pretty new to all this animation stuff ;)
oh and all others looking at this topic, please post your ideas as i am considering using this as my next sig and would appreciate it if you helped me make it as good as possible ;)
03-20-2005, 09:09 PM
Illegalx17
agh it looks like a light. you should have the glow come up slower, then stay a little less and fade out too. . .other than that its awesome. great idea.
03-20-2005, 09:16 PM
masokist
i like the anim, but i dont like the glow of the X, it looks awkward, and goofy, sorry, just my opinion, i think make it a little faster, and kinda not totally "outside" flash it inside a little bit, maybe even make it "flash" in and then fade out when done ya know?
and for another word, how about . . . . . Extreme or Expert or Extraordinary (j / k, way too long) umm. . . . not sure of any more. . if i think ill let ya know.
03-20-2005, 10:51 PM
SneyePa
I LIKE THA LAST ONE YA DID IT MUCH BETTER
03-20-2005, 11:26 PM
tabloid
express
lookin really good, i dont like the glow on the X though, i honestly think it looked better without it. but I do agree that EXCEED comes too close to your right border. Perhaps expand the width of the sig itself, it'll be a bitch but worth it in the end. Also the background does seem a bit plain. I think a render or something would be good. Since there is some downtime between animations, it would give viewers something to look at.
Overall, great idea and executed real well.
03-21-2005, 04:15 AM
robgasm
yeah, extreme is too long - i already tried that, i might decide to make it again but im not too sure..
03-22-2005, 02:18 AM
jerner
The glow looks like it should fade and fade out longer, instead of appear, and stay at 100% opacity for a long time and then disappear. Do you know what I mean? ^^
I like the idea, the X and the animation looks fine, original as said.
I also agree with the background, it looks a little bit out of place, not really sure though, maybe you could try at least something. Good job anyway,
03-22-2005, 03:12 AM
rapidx
I like the second u did, the one that the glow doesnt stay a lot.. In the third one i think that the glow stays too long and when the opacity is 100% the image is shit..! :P Nice work though..!
[EDIT]: it think excel is the best, exceed is a bit to the right... :P
03-22-2005, 04:52 AM
Mitsuki Rain
ya the background is out of place...its too...flat...plain..it doesnt quite go...wish i could help more...but i dont know what you could do to it
03-22-2005, 05:00 AM
robgasm
lol, no one actually guessed the time added between the 2nd and the 3rd - to those who are complaining its your mind playing tricks making you think its a long time, 0.05 seconds added
ill take these coments and use them - illl try the inner glow and i agree that it should glow more at a lower opacity