here comes my last work...

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10-03-2007, 02:50 PM
Garis

here comes my last work...

Hey everybody... :)
here my last work with JoJo...
I hope you like it, but this is not final version becouse I thing something missing in the right, and text little too small... Am i right?

http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/5201/sig18vy8.jpg
10-03-2007, 02:59 PM
elliot

blend the glowing designs in more
10-03-2007, 03:46 PM
cC.Aleksander

Agree with elliot... Also what is the green in the top left? Distracting to me=/
10-03-2007, 07:53 PM
tunafish69

I agree w/ both of thems lol. :D
10-04-2007, 02:15 AM
Garis

Quote:

Originally Posted by elliot

blend the glowing designs in more

I am not understood this clearly... :(:confused:
10-04-2007, 04:38 AM
cC.Aleksander

He means the things on her face and cap... ther star and the otrher thing
10-05-2007, 03:44 AM
Garis

Quote:

Originally Posted by silentshadow

He means the things on her face and cap... ther star and the otrher thing

And? xD
really dont understood that i must do to her.... :s
10-05-2007, 04:22 AM
erikvduyn

the glowy things on her look just slammed on, blend them in a bit...
10-05-2007, 08:25 AM
Daemon

some more effects to blend plz and i dont like those shiny things the star or those on her face:) i would remove them and then blend her in with some more effetcs
10-06-2007, 01:19 AM
VoodooGypsy

Jeez, some people here need to revise what they say to make sure it makes sense and that they spelled everything right.

Ok, for the sig. Yeah, the right side is bothering me with the emptiness there.
You can probably get rid of the star and make the design on her face less apparent.
Looks cool though, I love the colors you got.
10-06-2007, 04:37 AM
Garis

Thank you everyone for helping... ;)
Now I can go to finish this work...
10-06-2007, 04:39 AM
Roy

Hey man, that looks really nice. The only thing I'd do is tone down that star on the bill of the hat. Other than that, good job. What does the stock look like? (I'd current that one if I were you.)
10-07-2007, 03:10 AM
NSR

The green on her cap is slightly distracting...
Make a new layer, go over it with purple, and then set the layer on hue....
Glowing designs stand out too much IMO...
Probably your best so far tho ;)
10-07-2007, 04:34 AM
Garis

Oh.. Thank you a lot... ;)
you guys are rock... :D
thank you... ;)
10-07-2007, 12:06 PM
Garis

http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/2420/sig18is9.jpg
Here v2
what more needed?
;)
Special thanks to NSR, I like his idea of pink cap ;)