My first try at this, Optimus Prime

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10-22-2007, 06:07 PM
Bloodshot

My first try at this, Optimus Prime

heres my first try at this kind of style... i did it using an optimus prime render so yeah. here it is, c&c please ^^

http://i190.photobucket.com/albums/z...ptimuscopy.jpg
10-22-2007, 06:08 PM
elliot

i cant tell its optimus prime :/
10-22-2007, 06:11 PM
Bloodshot

Look closer ^^ you can make out his hand and fist, its supposed to be really rought textured
10-22-2007, 06:16 PM
Tie Ninja

ya its hard to see the render if you could see him better i think it would look better overall. you probably know this but the text needs some work lol sorry
10-22-2007, 06:19 PM
Trikato

um you should definatly make this "rough texture" a bit less noticable cause the render is hard to make out even though I can see it clearly it is a bit of a strain atleast lessen it on his face
10-22-2007, 06:26 PM
Bloodshot

damn anytime i make a sig and i really like it everyone else hates it rofl!! and every time i make a sig i think is bad yall love it!!! so confusing, and yeah i tried changing the roughness on the render, it makes it too light, the render was crap to start with all grainy so i went with it and did that ^^
BTW I don't know what u guys ar talking about =PPPP i liked the text :D

and besides, like i said =P its my first try at this style
10-22-2007, 06:31 PM
Tie Ninja

maybe the render was just a bad choice lol its just hard to see and for me the render usually should be the focal point. your text is just faded and not that easy to read, if you did like a outer glow on it or a little stroke to make it stick out instead of just letting it fade away with the bg i think it would stand out and look better. I think you did a good job overall with this being your frist time with this type of style
10-22-2007, 07:49 PM
Trikato

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bloodshot

damn anytime i make a sig and i really like it everyone else hates it rofl!! and every time i make a sig i think is bad yall love it!!! so confusing, and yeah i tried changing the roughness on the render, it makes it too light, the render was crap to start with all grainy so i went with it and did that ^^
BTW I don't know what u guys ar talking about =PPPP i liked the text :D

and besides, like i said =P its my first try at this style

Dude don't fret no one ever likes my sigs xD
The text was really good for it and it is a good outcome for the style I just suggest next using a better render xD
10-22-2007, 08:05 PM
Uprising

Not true Trikato, I love your second halo sig.
10-22-2007, 09:20 PM
Bloodshot

Quote:

Originally Posted by Uprising

Not true Trikato, I love your second halo sig.

i mean no offense by this uprising but daemon caught me on this all the time

how is this comment of help to my sig?
10-22-2007, 09:48 PM
Lordemir

I have a question...is that a cow on the right bottom side of the sig?
Actually i dont like the right side at all it just doesnt, imo, seem to fit the rest of it.
10-22-2007, 09:53 PM
Soap

Hey, you should make books - Wheres Optimus, for cool kids deprived of Where's Wally? LOL - joke - tried too hard, mate. Simplify - design - don't whack a render in apply some filters and then think its a design. :P
10-22-2007, 10:54 PM
Bloodshot

Quote:

Originally Posted by Soap

Hey, you should make books - Wheres Optimus, for cool kids deprived of Where's Wally? LOL - joke - tried too hard, mate. Simplify - design - don't whack a render in apply some filters and then think its a design. :P

what are you talking aout dude you completely lost me... and i didnt just whack a render in and apply some filters... it has so many more steps, you have no clue what i started with even...
10-23-2007, 01:01 PM
Daemon

Well my advice is to make the render noticeable. You defently need to get a focal point cuz right now there isnt one. also thext could use some work or another font dont know about placement cuz i cant see th render.
10-23-2007, 01:44 PM
Skatanic_

Right now here is what it is..... there's alot of blurred or rough patches.... here's somethin that often helps with "Rough" sigs if you merge all the layers together but keep them so you get a master layer which is the whole sig if you get what i mean

so your sig is 30 layers... but make them all 1 layer but keep the 30 merge the copys and then change the lighting effect overlay usually helps me :)

but the text O.o there's text?
10-23-2007, 01:49 PM
Daemon

Quote:

Originally Posted by Skatanic_

Right now here is what it is..... there's alot of blurred or rough patches.... here's somethin that often helps with "Rough" sigs if you merge all the layers together but keep them so you get a master layer which is the whole sig if you get what i mean

so your sig is 30 layers... but make them all 1 layer but keep the 30 merge the copys and then change the lighting effect overlay usually helps me :)

but the text O.o there's text?

Bad way dont merge them simply make an applied imgage
10-23-2007, 02:06 PM
Skatanic_

Ah thats what i mean :)... oops :D
10-23-2007, 05:00 PM
Bloodshot

I dont have image apply image on my photoshop, its a hella old version of photoshop
thanks for all the help on this btw guys, like i said before this was my first time trying something like that so all the comments help