The Endless Feed

I realized how long it been since i uploaded anything and i havent uploaded anything in the new year. So i sat down and tried to do some c4d, im still a noob at this and im not too good on the postwork either:) but anyway what do you think? :

Endless Feed v1:
http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs23/f/20...monGFXvoid.jpg

Version 2 and the b&w version is on my Deviant art. Also smaller wiew

http://daemongfxvoid.deviantart.com/

C&C pls:)

Fep, so big and purty. Lol. I don't know really what to say about it.

Oh, and you need to empty your PM box btw. Lol.

Looks awesome.
My only complaint is that I couldn't see the "T" in "The" and the "D" in "Feed".
It might just be my screen though.

Yea, thats what was bugging me. Lighten the red up, on the "T" and "D".

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Originally Posted by Winston

Fep, so big and purty. Lol. I don't know really what to say about it.

Oh, and you need to empty your PM box btw. Lol.

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Done i didnt get one from you?

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Originally Posted by VoodooGypsy

Looks awesome.
My only complaint is that I couldn't see the "T" in "The" and the "D" in "Feed".
It might just be my screen though.

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Thx okay i might gonna light those up:)

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I kinda like it, decent model
The composition isnt too great, and its quite monotone with little blending
Reasonably nice though, good work.

Very sexy. Once the red on the T and D is fixed, it will be better.


Lovin' the lighting.

I'm diggin it big time :P
The angle alone of the piece is really something that makes it stand out. Also the slight shadows, of what looks like a emblem, and the slight Daemon makes it that much deeper.
although MAYBE it could use a tad more color, I'm a fan :D

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Originally Posted by robgasm

I kinda like it, decent model
The composition isnt too great, and its quite monotone with little blending
Reasonably nice though, good work.

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Thx, im still pretty new to c4d, but ill keep practise on it, i think one of the hardest things is the materials cant really figgering them out:) never comes out like i want em:P

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Originally Posted by [PHXN] New001

I'm diggin it big time :P
The angle alone of the piece is really something that makes it stand out. Also the slight shadows, of what looks like a emblem, and the slight Daemon makes it that much deeper.
although MAYBE it could use a tad more color, I'm a fan :D

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Thx alot, what a great comment, do you like it enough to perhaps fav it on da:) color? the actual render or the bg?

I don't have a DA, but I should probably make one eventually. Probably when I have a bunch more LPs I will.

And not sure where per say to add the colors. Maybe the little brushes (are they butterflies) could use a little color just to add a contrast to the outside of the render.

/cries
I have not done graphics in too long a time:
This stuff is awesome! Just do as above suggested, and lighten some things, and it'll be perfetto

-konfusion

I like the main text render.
The background is tearing too much for me..
the typography is hard to read properly.

Thats some pretty sweet modeling. I like how all the letters are at like a different angle. you should add something to the background blend it more though. Definetly a lot better than what i can do. Tis' a shame sic.sick6 doesn't come on here anymore, he could probably offer some incredible CNC on this.
Lol too bad I lack 3d modeling knowledge to critique this decently.