Acension

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Cnc would be much appreciated :)

I cant understand that the render is.
also the colors are too strong, too bright.
lower the opacity on text.
some BG are too empty. only black.

The render is sora from kingdom hearts. The colours were intentionally strong as was the empty space. I'll sort out the text though. Thanks garis.

I like the flow and depth, but the text is bad. Imo its good, but I'm still kind of new at this.

usually i dont like overcontrasted sigs..but this is really working...
i think you should current it.. i like it alot

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Originally Posted by Immortal.

usually i dont like overcontrasted sigs..but this is really working...
i think you should current it.. i like it alot

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Thanks immortal :D

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Originally Posted by Vel

I like the flow and depth, but the text is bad. Imo its good, but I'm still kind of new at this.

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it's great your critiquing, especially since your new. However I think you should tell him HOW to fix what is bad, rather than just saying it's bad. Even if you don't really know then say it, I don't know. But the best way to learn is to teach, and so i think you should give him example on how he could fix his text and such.

Sry ratchet I'l critique this later, i don't have time for a long 10-15 minute critique, and i don't want to short change ya, so I'm just gonna leave this until a bit later.

npz ratchet

Hmm....Text....If it was me...i've have it a different color...and 2 different fonts. one slightly bigger than the other. and one slightly more visible than the other. Like in my Prince of persia one for example. "awaken the beast" is kinda hidden, but it's still there and readable. should try this as well..

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Or something along that line. or seperate it all togehter. opposite sides of the character. Theres so much stuff you can do with the text man. i see waht your going for though. other than the text i wouldn't change a thing. i love the colors, the character, your positioning and the effects. very nice sig, just tweak ur text a little bit, it's a little too powerful IMO. It's up to you, just some ideas im throwin out there. Lol.

Damn it totally went to the left, instead of how i plotted it out lol

Okay, i know I'm a little late, but here goes.

This sig is overall pretty good, granite I don't exactly understand the intentional empty space, however i do get the colors.
The sig is okay, however i wish there would have been more of a background as it would have done this sig a lot of good. I feel like there is just too much darkness, and not enough of a background, but sometimes things like this work.
One thing to remember when working with a sig with no background is to keep the sig small. This sig is rather large and for having a lot of empty space you could have easily afforded to chop it up a bit.

The blending is pretty nice, I like the smudging into the light source it really make the render go with it well. It makes the light source look a lot less "created" and more part of it. nice job.
I think the light source is a bit too bright on that background however. It seems to me that your background is a dark dark black and then all the sudden there is a VERY bright and blown out white light source. However it isn't too much of a problem.

The colors are pretty cool, they go with the render nicely. However I think the text needs a lot of work. The font isn't working for me. I would suggest a font not a system looking. Maybe a bit smoother, or some Japanese ,looking font, after all it is anime. Just a suggestion, if you'd like and you allow me to touch your sig i could show you what i mean.

Nice job overall though i really think the lack of a BG is taking away from the sig.

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Originally Posted by Papa

Okay, i know I'm a little late, but here goes.

This sig is overall pretty good, granite I don't exactly understand the intentional empty space, however i do get the colors.
The sig is okay, however i wish there would have been more of a background as it would have done this sig a lot of good. I feel like there is just too much darkness, and not enough of a background, but sometimes things like this work.
One thing to remember when working with a sig with no background is to keep the sig small. This sig is rather large and for having a lot of empty space you could have easily afforded to chop it up a bit.

The blending is pretty nice, I like the smudging into the light source it really make the render go with it well. It makes the light source look a lot less "created" and more part of it. nice job.
I think the light source is a bit too bright on that background however. It seems to me that your background is a dark dark black and then all the sudden there is a VERY bright and blown out white light source. However it isn't too much of a problem.

The colors are pretty cool, they go with the render nicely. However I think the text needs a lot of work. The font isn't working for me. I would suggest a font not a system looking. Maybe a bit smoother, or some Japanese ,looking font, after all it is anime. Just a suggestion, if you'd like and you allow me to touch your sig i could show you what i mean.

Nice job overall though i really think the lack of a BG is taking away from the sig.

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Thanks papa and sure you can play around with my sigs, after all it is helping me :)