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Please be nice, first time trying something like this...

http://www.deviantart.com/view/16569651/

Comments? Questions? Concerns?

meh. ok but looks a li'l simple. the bg is some filters and the rest is just some matrix extrudes. not bad tho, just simple, which isnt bad! its not quite my style tho.

Yes, I didn't go for complexity I was merely experimenting. What would you do to improve it?

oh theres not much to do to improve it. its good. its your first step in this kinda thing, instead of improving it move on and try something else, just keep on making more and more until you get a lot better.

Yeah thats good advice...just move on to the next then keep moving on...good job. Ill give a 8/10

thanks guys, I hope to get better then!

lessen the brushing... it is completely hiding the render!! :(

I actually like it. I would agree with Illegalx17 and move on to the next step. I would probably give you 8.5/10 or possibly 9/10. Good work dude!
-Whitegecko-

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Originally posted by Forgotten@Mar 27 2005, 03:53 PM
Concerns?

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I'm very concerned with this one.... :lol:

I think the glow or whatever it is is too bright.

what program is everyone using for these? i love that kind of stuff but have no idea on how to do it.

its cinema4d, i may write some tuts on it

You should never just move on i think. If you can't do something, don't ignore it and ddo somethign else. Take advice on how to improve it and keep going until you get it.

I think it's really good, erxcept some white abstract brushing on the bg wouldn't go a miss. Nice job, cool brushing on the render, really energetic.

wow, 3 words, bright, blurry, and blending.

1. Bright: i like it, but you cant see the render AT ALL underneath

2. Blurry: the background you have looks as if you radial blurred a few brush strokes, work with some abstract brushes back there, it will look a lot sharper

3. Blending: Try and incorporate your render into your image better, all it looks like you did to it was color it and then maybe change a blending mode, if you make it match the BG with better colors, and a dif blend mode, i looks much better.

good job with the image though, i hope these suggestions will aid you as you continue to make more stuff like this, it just takes a little practice. keep up the work!!!

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Originally posted by Crofty@Mar 28 2005, 09:52 AM
You should never just move on i think. If you can't do something, don't ignore it and ddo somethign else. Take advice on how to improve it and keep going until you get it.

I think it's really good, erxcept some white abstract brushing on the bg wouldn't go a miss. Nice job, cool brushing on the render, really energetic.

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thats true, but on this particular piece, i think that it'd be better to move on cuz its a complete piece, just not great quality. to improve it he would have to redo a lot so its better to just move on at this point!

I Like the blurred distorted background, works well, you done a lot with such a simple render, I like it very much, Good use of typography on there.

9/10 Keep it up!