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Ok here is another one i call him plasma knight lool.... B)
i will change text if i get an better idea but now see how it came out...yet
Edit 1: Border changed...
Edit 2: little white could removed
http://www.nefkom.info/ablage/bergi_plas.jpg
cnc / current ?
the bgs good, but the render doesnt fit well and i dont like it also im not feeling the border
i agree totalyQuote:
Originally posted by SSJTrunks2004@Jul 4 2005, 04:42 PM
the bgs good, but the render doesnt fit well and i dont like it also im not feeling the border
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lol no i think you are bumpin with this long cnc´s everywhere ... :P i removed the border so how can you totaly agree :blink: :P :blink:Quote:
Originally posted by .Homicide@Jul 4 2005, 11:52 PM
i agree totaly
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looks alot better now render still doesnt have the same brightness, the bgs bright and the renders dark and it looks squished ,just improve that and it will look alot better.
I don't know what you guys mean by the render doesn't fit well. If you're talking about the colours I think the colour of the render doesn't always have to match that of the BG.
The way you've softly colourized the outside of the render in an electric blue colour is awesome. You've made it look somewhat like the knight is entering the atmosphere, the bright green lights accensuate this further. Also, the vivid, bright brushing towards the left just adds to this, overall creating depth and a scenario. I think the typography and text effect works nicely with the knight theme, also.
I really like this signature, you've done good man. Only one tiny single thing I don't like about this is the white cloud hovering to the right of the knight's head.
In short, it's a great sig. Very good job.
wow that a cnc with someone can work.
yes i want to get the feeling that he entering from a plasma storm or clouds....
thanks for the long cnc and ;) cloud removed!
i think that the render looks medievil and the background looks a lot more electrifying...I think the two styles clash.
a medieval knight with green lightet plasma eyes? :blink: well ok... :huh: i think it looks more like end time creature or something phantasy style like...Quote:
Originally posted by aplix@Jul 5 2005, 02:10 AM
i think that the render looks medievil and the background looks a lot more electrifying...I think the two styles clash.
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the render doesn't fit the BG but the BG is good the text is good i think you should current it
Though there may be a lot of tones due to the brushes used, I still see a lack of depth. It seems like what was done is you had a layer with the knight and you made a layer above it and below it. You brushed on both layers, the difference being in the hues. the top layer having tints and the lower layer having shades. Looking closely, the cut job was done well, but I'm not feeling the slight glow you have around him. The knight is being covered by too much of the brushing so there is no environment. Albeit the blue brushing makes it seem like theres a bit of a glow given off by the knight, it still doesn't substantiate any reason for smothering the render ;) I think you could have made it cleaner and a bit more organized. I realize the style you wanted, I'm referring to its execution. If you were to add depth (show the brushing getting smaller, less saturated, and a little darker. dont go crazy though) I think that would establish the scene better and it would show the knight is actually there, rather than just slapped on. I like the simple border, I'm always a fan of that. The typography is decent. Typo is difficult to pull off when doing something creative and actually make it have the right aspects of aesthetics without going overboard. Keeping it simple, along with the border, is the best plan. The sig as a whole doesn't flow too well, the render seems to just interrupt it, but if you want to improve this, keep working on it :)
I agree with what's said above, that's some good CnC Jack! ;) But I also believe some of the above mentioned flaws could be viewed positively. Good job Bergi.
@Jack: thanks for youre time :rolleyes: btw not 2 layers and between the knight just one bg
Btw Bergi I think that sig is looking almost perfect now. Good job man.
