Weee, this is like my first attemt on Abstract this millenium (month), lol.
This is my result from the past few days, I think I started on the second one yesterday. I hop you like all of them (duuh?) or at least one of them...
Here they are:
ABSTRACT, lol woohoo. I'm quite happy with it, I personally like the colors, and the render finally blended quite well, after some hard work. Have I lost my spark? ;) http://www.eagleimg.com/up/29314.jpg
Moahaha, can't let go of the dark grunge. It's eating me up. This render and theme is taken from a Swedish horror movie called "Strandvaskaren", or as it's called in the english version, "Drowning Ghost", as you see. I tried something new on this one, with the cracks and Almost plain black as bg, "almost". Tell me what you think. http://img40.exs.cx/img40/4451/sig476ps.gif
Here is an update from one of my earlier sigs, which I didn't like that much (the render). But I have changed the render, adn I think it looks pretty cool. The render is one of the members in Slipknot, "surprise!" lol. And I like the way his 'scars' turned out. Better / Worse? http://www.eagleimg.com/up/29319.jpg
Jerner
03-29-2005, 10:23 AM
Illegalx17
meh. the first is ok, but a li'l plain, i've seen better abstract from you, the second. . .the bg is ok, nothing special tho, and the animation. . .welli dont see any need for it :( the third one is the best of the three, but the bg's a li'l plain. :( keep workin on it man, sorry, but nothing about these really pulls me in. :(
03-29-2005, 10:31 AM
jerner
haha? how can you think that they all are plain? The first one is not plain, lol. I really don't think so, plain is "clouds". well if that's what you think.
03-29-2005, 10:31 AM
Pleymo
I like them all!
Yur first one looks good for one of your first abstract sigs! I like the text with his reflexion, and the border looks fine.
And the other 2 grunges looks fine, the animation is simple and they look a bit plain, but very nice! Your other rabieshund-sigs are some better, but they look good. :)
03-29-2005, 10:39 AM
robgasm
rofl jern u dun tons of abstract this month!
the other too are a bit boring - everybody is doin that style now and they all look the same
03-29-2005, 10:46 AM
Illegalx17
if everybody means me, jerner, and rabie :p. and jerner the first one is not plain, that was my bad, when i looked back at it i realized my mistake. the first one is good, but i thought that you needed to cut around the render a little better, you can see some of the previous pallete behind him, or maybe just an outer glow? idk i dont really like it tho :( i like sig, i ment i dont like hte effect on the render. very nice dude. must've gotten my things mixed up sorry about that :p
03-29-2005, 11:01 AM
jerner
deep blue, I hope you don't think something is bad just becous many people does it? that's not right, at least I comment the skill, for example , not if I like the game or not. And no, I have not done any abstract sigs this month.
that's not a part of the render, it's something I tried to do to make it look glowish or burning. Don't know, yee, It seems like you guys eben don't like the style and say: nah, that's rubbish, not even suggestions? I don't like it, but maybe I'm wrong.
03-29-2005, 11:07 AM
Illegalx17
DB couldnt be more wrong, they do NOT all look the same. and i guess rabie + me + jerner = everybody apparently :p and jerner, i see what you did on the render now, but i dont relaly like it. other then that its awesome :D gj
03-29-2005, 11:18 AM
jerner
meh?
first: "meh. the first is ok, but a li'l plain"
now: "other then that its awesome :D gj"
that's a BIG differece. :/
03-29-2005, 11:21 AM
Illegalx17
i told you, it was a screwup. the way i do it is i look closely at all sigs then go back and type everything that i think. i was thinking, "render, animation, plain" about hte three sigs, and i wrote down plain about the first as well for some reason. srry dude, that was a typo, or actually it wasnt a typo as much ment for the third
03-29-2005, 11:22 AM
Illegalx17
shit man, i think im just gonna stop critiquing ppl cuz they always get pissed off when i do. im really tired ok, im outta it, if you dont want me to critique or comment then fine! screw this i'll just keep my mouth shut. damn man
03-29-2005, 11:27 AM
jerner
LOL, hehe, I'm so sorry.
I really love it when people criticize (AND give advices..), but I needed to be sure, since when I posted the earlier version of the last one here, you said:
"great job! i dont like the last, but the first two are awesome!" and with that you ment; the one you think is too plain now, and my current one. I just thought it was fun, but sorry that I made you upset, would aprecciate some more deitals though, like suggestions, tell me what's wrong, but I did not get mad at you, sorry mate.
03-29-2005, 11:34 AM
Illegalx17
ok, the first one, maybe add a li'l more brushing, and i dont like the color on the right side. the second one i dont really have much advice for, the animation isnt the best tho, the third one is good, but get some like torn/grunge white brushes in there, a li'l too plain. i love the calligraphic brushes tho, where'd ya get em? i prolly have em but just cant find em :p
03-29-2005, 11:38 AM
jerner
goodie =D thank you very much. ^^
I see what you mean now, which is why I want this type of critique. Some torn brushes, eh? I'll see what I can find, and those text-brushes you mean? I'm not quite sure :/ but if I find them I will PM you, alright?
03-29-2005, 11:39 AM
robgasm
i gues i shudve commented more too, the first is a little busy - the brushes need to mix more, the second and third seem pretty good but i am gettng a bit tired of these sigs with dark grunge bg and sum writings then a dude with a spooky white face in the middle and a few scratch brushes over him
oh and i like all the cracks along the sides on the second one ;)
03-29-2005, 11:45 AM
jerner
hmm, like 4 of those are brushing , I'm talking about sigs. But you sure got a point, sorry I really forget quick, it feels like I made all those a year ago ^^
Sorry again for that, I'm really gone today. Thank you for suggesting and explaing.
03-29-2005, 11:46 AM
robgasm
nah its ok - i count most things i make as sigs, even if they jsut brushings - heck im using a just brushing sig atm