http://mars.walagata.com/w/peac0ck/anime.jpg
CnC appreciated, as always.
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http://mars.walagata.com/w/peac0ck/anime.jpg
CnC appreciated, as always.
Nice brushing, nice colors and nice blending
but there's something funny about her hand =\
i love it, the brushing everything is interesting in it. Its very cool 9/10
Well blended, 8/10
Version2, fixed text.
http://mars.walagata.com/w/peac0ck/anime2.jpg
very nice i really like the brushing
1 word: Nice!
hmm
Can you plz send me this render?
please..
^ OMG, i never knew you were like that man...
lol, j/k...
Brushing is good, but render dont blend in the well, txt could use color... IMO....
LOL naa I'm not like that, I used the render because I liked the colors alot.
Thank you Peac0ck :D
Lets see... your composition depends on what your trying to show or express. If you want to show that the chick is sexy (yeah, its a cartoon I know haha, bare with me. you know what I mean), Id say you should rotate it so she's laying on her back with her head on the left side. That way you get a better view of her assets. If your going purely for color, Id suggest keeping composition as is. The color scheme works. The problematic thing is, first of all, the character (not render ;) ) is sitting on top of the background, and secondly, remember that the character is a chick. We're assuming she's supposed to be hot, so you have to think about how the background should reflect that. Women have curves, and theyre soft and smooth (party :lol: ). The background is rough and sorta jagged. Id say that you should make them match more. Change the background so its smoother and softer (dont blur it up a bunch though). Give it some curves. Make it seem more like she's there. If you want a suggestion about what to do, Id say make it look like she's laying on a pink cloth or blanket or something. So make a pink background and add wrinkles (keep the lightsource of the character in mind). Thatd be interesting. Keep up the work though, and consider what I told you on aim.
edit: about the cloth/blanket idea, it would make the text a lot easier to read. Its a good that the font is simple, but to give it more of an elegant look (even though she's a whore lol) use a sarif font, but dont make it a tall font. Times New Roman is too tall, you need something a little different than that. Look around any sarif fonts you have and test a few of them out. Also its good to see the border is simple.
I like it a lot. I agree with Jack though when he says the background would match the render much more if it was smoother. But I like the sig anyway, great job 9/10.
