Grunge by Lumix

http://img392.imageshack.us/img392/8087/halo30pq.png

I don't do grunge much but I'm pretty happy with the outcome..
CnC/Current?

EDIT v2 (Render) :

http://img380.imageshack.us/img380/6738/halo34zk.png

Here's an edit for you guys.. :)

Love the brushing on the right side of the sig, not so much on the left....Text is good. But the render just doesn't feel right.

the render is to sharpened rest is fine

Sharpened too much + and I am not liking the lighting on the render....

good try though

everything looks good besides the render like so many of us has said lol, nice job anyways :)

Looks cool, i just think the render kills it, rest is fine, text looks nice :)

I think that is awesome.

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Originally posted by MystiKal@Sep 7 2005, 01:11 PM
Sharpened too much + and I am not liking the lighting on the render....

good try though

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Same, and also the left side brushing is just bad, the right side is fine..

Blend the render more and fix lighting :P

Lumix, I know the feel you were going for, its different from a bunch of trend whoring.. I like the idea. Good job ^^

luv the bg except the render

*UPDATED*
Well I like v1 better but what do you guys think?

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Originally posted by Lumix@Sep 8 2005, 04:06 AM
*UPDATED*
Well I like v1 better but what do you guys think?

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You still didn't try to fix the lighting. Now that I look at it more, the stock doesn't fit well imo.

I like the bg, but like the others said the render is sharpened too much. I like the text. The lighting is off imo.