k guys please cnc and tell me if i should current
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k guys please cnc and tell me if i should current
http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/5...number12br.png
its ok man, a few minor probs tho (imo) the yellow bit on the render, the scan lines been dark at the bottom and lighter on the rest and the text positioning, you sould put it top right imo.
but apart from those lil things gj, nice improvment man.
oh and IMO ur current owns it
yah my current took a long time to make mabye ill try a smaller version of my current thanks bust
ummm, also, you might wanna put the render in a diff spot or something seeing as how his face is being cut off a bit.
youre steadily improving in knowledge of the program (learning how to do certain things such as mulitcolor, etc) which is good, but im noticing youre lacking a lot of visual sense of where things go, which is key to making a good sig or a picture. id strongly suggest learning where text should go, (which btw is every designers nightmare), how to get the optimal look with the colors youre using, etc. A good way of doing this is looking at good designers work, browsing ads in a magazine, etc. once you get that down, youll get much, much better. keep up the improvement :)
looks pretty good... i think the scanlines stand out a little too much and i don't like the yellow in it.. but otherwise pretty nice.. and def. no current
hmmmm not as good as comments as i thought it would get well ill keep attempting to improve what u mean magazine ads?
i think he means look at ads in magazines and just look at the placement of the text versus the main focus/picture of the ad/banner and then try and translate that placement into your sigs.
Look pretty good to me, although some adjustments to the text would help alot. Not all text has to be fancy, plain text can work sometimes too :).
aye, plain > fancy IMO when it comes to text. and yea, i meant look in magazine ads and try to incorporate that type of placement into your own work. i said magazine ads because youll find a ton of good examples on placement, color etc in them.Quote:
Originally posted by Respire@Oct 26 2005, 11:33 PM
Look pretty good to me, although some adjustments to the text would help alot. Not all text has to be fancy, plain text can work sometimes too :).
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sorry for digging this up, i just thought id clarify.
Pretty nice, the brushing is a 'tad' bright for some tastes, the render is well placed, but I don't think its the best render (or blended too well). Text is a lil odd, and the scanlines at the right are too dark.
One of your best, though, but your current is better I think.
