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<3 myst. good work.
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if you coment or fav on one, please do it on the other, as there was equal effort involved
<3 myst. good work.
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Fav'd both! What a kickass render :)
awesome work. nuff said :P
Awesome render and lighting :)
DaMNMNMN!!!! Taht ish so shekshiful!!!! Great work you two! :D
Probably one of the best renders that i've seen, good job.
The top part of the render really gets in the way...
I really don't get the lighting either... I dunno, looks a little weird to me, but that might be what you were going for, so fuck what I think.
Hey thanks, I made the render =).Quote:
Originally posted by Heron@Oct 30 2005, 08:52 AM
Probably one of the best renders that i've seen, good job.
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I hate the lighting, but daMMMMMMM thats really nice + reander is great too....
whats so bad about the lighting? Tell me why so I can improve.Quote:
Originally posted by Spid3r@Oct 30 2005, 10:15 AM
I hate the lighting, but daMMMMMMM thats really nice + reander is great too....
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+faved
quite nice, but its too high, maybe delete the lower dark part?
Then there wouldnt be that feeling of depth.Quote:
Originally posted by .reflex@Oct 30 2005, 10:52 AM
+faved
quite nice, but its too high, maybe delete the lower dark part?
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What I think really makes it look nice is that metalic texture, it really makes it look mechanical. Is that done by just adding a texture or something, I never used C4D before so I wouldn't know.
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Originally posted by şmyst@Oct 30 2005, 09:34 AM
whats so bad about the lighting? Tell me why so I can improve.
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yea i'd really like to know too.. underwater, light is bright at the top and gets darker as you go down.. i don't see the problem with it :blink:
You should try it, its fun. Its called a material that you add.Quote:
Originally posted by Heron@Oct 30 2005, 02:53 PM
What I think really makes it look nice is that metalic texture, it really makes it look mechanical. Is that done by just adding a texture or something, I never used C4D before so I wouldn't know.
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the light doestnt go with the color of light shining on the render...
you see the render's light and then BOOM on that top right its that annoying cyan color that you dont see anywhere else on that piece....
Lighting is fine, dont people understand its UNDERWATER?
lol
the think that bothers me about the lighting, and again it might just be me -.. well umm I'll just give you some good cnc
The top right part is way too bright, it should have started light, then spread around a little LITTLE darker...
The lighting on the render is weird aswell, the light source is obviously coming from the top right side, so you should darken up the bright parts which actually shouldn't get any light - or just a little. For example: If they're underneath a certain part of the render, then they should be shadowed, or, if they are really far from the light source (here I'm talking about the left bottom side) then they really shouldn't get as much light. - that goes for the background in that area aswell.
The bubbles:
Well, I'm no bubble expert, but I think that the point of bubbles is that they go up, and hardly stay in the bottom... So it'd be more realistic if you'd add them a lot higher - just on the render and then spreading upwards.
A little green colour should be added aswell, and lowering of the contrast will give it a better "professional" feel IMO, since it would be easier on the eyes.
The parts in the bottom could be blurred, smudged and darkened, but that's just an idea...
Text seems like it was the last minute's job and you didn't have time for it.
Hope I helped in some way :)
I really like the depth in it.. that worked good.. dont really like the bubbles they look very big :P a bit 2 big imo.. and yes the lightning is abit 2 bright for a see look I think.. also to place the bubbles a bit higher would good like metal said
wow man, very nice as everyone has said exellent depth there, and as element said the bubbles are a lil big, but still an amazing job.
yea i'm not bubble expert lol
oh well
