Heaven's Light

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/24728737/

Comment, +fav or whatever as usual lol :P

looks good could have more detail and could be soomther and try to emphasise the theme more apart from that its good like the light especially

Looks like you've used the same c4d render over and over, use different ones, looks too repetative, but keep trying :)

thx for the comments and just to tell ya all of them are different renders lol just the same material :P and I wanted to do more with the light but need to learn more.

P.S. Renders made with 3Ds not C4D :P

pretty cool...reminds me of a flux capacitor :D

this looks sooo awesome!!!

keep up the good work!!!

thx for the comments :)

I like it but i think there should only be one light, it would make it more special

It looks good man, I love that feeling of intensity. Great work.

thx comments. :)

1) has absolutely zero depth
2) too monotone, needs more colors
3) the renders are jagged and could be much better
4) brushing lacks detail, and therefore looks sloppy
5) the use of the fractals doesn't add anything to the brushing, and is quite trendy.

don't take offense if you think it sounds harsh. that's my criticism, i'm not gonna lie to you.

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Originally posted by Sui Generis@Nov 10 2005, 05:07 PM
1) has absolutely zero depth
2) too monotone, needs more colors
3) the renders are jagged and could be much better
4) brushing lacks detail, and therefore looks sloppy
5) the use of the fractals doesn't add anything to the brushing, and is quite trendy.

don't take offense if you think it sounds harsh. that's my criticism, i'm not gonna lie to you.

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lol dont worry I love when people tell the truth in what they think, my first month with 3Ds and doing abstract art so I still got alot to learn :)

Looks pretty nice...
work some more then fav.