Mangos New Work

http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d1...Epoch4copy.jpg
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d1...Epoch3copy.jpg
http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d1...Epoch2copy.jpg
C&C RATE PLZ GUYS PLZ I BEG!!

lol thnx

Meh, not feeling them to omuch. Second would be nice if his shirt were green or the bg were pink.

yea the kanye west sig was all defaults and filters and i know that the shirt sticks out from the bg but thats what i was trying to show ;)

OK, this is the second time i have had to use this analogy, lol. It is not to put you down or something bad directed toward you, just something to let you know.
Just because you get something you were going for does not mean it is good. I.E.: Someone makes a completely horrible tag and someone says eww it is ugly, the maker says no, i was trying to make it ugly. That does not make it good.

Lets see...

1. first imo is alittle blurry and somewhat bright. The text effect imo has to go. and the Mango text looks like you were copying lumix :P nice try overall on that one.

2.His shirt imo really bothers me, I think you should of done something to the bg alittle to help blend that in.Nice bg but the text also needs work imo.

3. The whole sig looks blurred and the right side imo is to blurred/smudged, not sure what you did. Cool bg but the render I think should be alittle sharper and darker. Once again the epoch text effect imo has to go, but the mango text is cool if you raise it up alittle to center it.

Overall nice job and nice try, keep messing with them.

P.S. wtf is up with the epoch text? new name? or are these rquests or something?

oh u know how some ppl have like permanent quote thingys

so i just put Epoch for the time being :-D

I really really really dislike epoch, lol.

i really dont like your typos. i think the gundam tag has most potential if you increase the width and add some more focused brushing/smudging etc.

Thnx guys i will work on that

i hate text >.<

I would say those are great looking signatures ! But i would have to concur with the comments of .nemesis and shodan :) .

Just my 0.2cents ,

Dagorion

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Originally posted by Wiseson@Nov 22 2005, 01:52 AM
Lets see...

1. first imo is alittle blurry and somewhat bright. The text effect imo has to go. and the Mango text looks like you were copying lumix* :P nice try overall on that one.

2.His shirt imo really bothers me, I think you should of done something to the bg alittle to help blend that in.Nice bg but the text also needs work imo.

3. The whole sig looks blurred and the right side imo is to blurred/smudged, not sure what you did. Cool bg but the render I think should be alittle sharper and darker. Once again the epoch text effect imo has to go, but the mango text is cool if you raise it up alittle to center it.

Overall nice job and nice try, keep messing with them.

P.S. wtf is up with the epoch text? new name? or are these rquests or something?

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OMG u gave cnc other than&#39; Gj man :)&#39; lol <3 ;)

i like the kayne west 1 its nice, but not feeling the placment of the mangos font at all the others i dont like tbh :( the motion blur on the font sould only be done in 1 direction imo.

thnx duudes now this is true critique

kanye=1337 wow they are all good cant find any thing wrong

omg ur the first one to say that i feel proud :-D rofl waffle

omfg backlash gave cnc

you need to work on your text atm.. and depth.. composition of the overall sig too..

OMFG, I&#39;m so proud of you Backlash.. :D

But anyway, I agree with Lumix, you need to work on your depth and text. The best signature out of them 3 is the Gundam one. Try a different font because all the signatures I&#39;ve seen made by you has the same font, and they don&#39;t always work. Prolly some work on the lighting for the Kanye West one.

lol thnx but em i donnt know how to do depth that well >.<
and text yea.. i unno how to do it well