C&C PLS!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v1...deathrow_2.jpg

alright C&C PLSS thanks u :)
EDIT....

if your wondering wat i did to krouser i added more detailed scars, turned his eyes white and made the snake sign on his knife more nodicable. :)

what you did to the render is nice, but what you did with the BG is horrible, it;s boring plain, looks like about two layers, and the monotone makes it look worse, i think you can do better with this, text isn't good either.

hmm k wats monotone? and wat style should i use wit this sig? (grunge, abstract) thnaks for the C&C oh and wat to do wit text any ideas for me?

monotone is single coloured

i'm thinking grunge but you need more detail

and text go plain black or white, try staying around 14 or smaller for size, and keep more to the corners, and don't add effects

allright sweet deal thanks :)

Nice manipulation of the render, it's cool. Good job with that.
I agree with what Sythe said about the BG and text. Try using different fonts and styles for the text, don't just stick with one font.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v1...deathrow_2.jpg

how abhout that...anybetter?

Urmm, coloring is a bit better.
Now, you gotta blend the render in, some depth..text is a bit better, not sure how you can improve it though, cus i suck at text too :P

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v1...deathrow_2.jpg

ALRIGHT finnal version i hope her it is :)

thkans to bhxTyrant for the blood :)

Way better. The white border doesn't work though, make it black, it'll be better imo. It's still lacking depth, but this is much better.
Nice :)

thank yiou :) did u get the version that is showing now because my photobucket was bein /*/ an showin the wrong one.. i will change the border to black an post it if it looks better :)

Yup, seeing the right version.
I think you still have to experiment with the text, you're not really doing anything to it, just changing the text placement..and it's still not working.

yeah i guess i'll keep tryin :) here is the black border part

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v1...deathrow_2.jpg

im only gonna comment on the text. I wud say that you need to make it more random placing instead of just normal straight. if u get what i mean? like mayb mess around with the text direction as if it was drawn there and if u wanna get really cool u cud make it look as if it was blood dripping off by just using the smudge tool and colouring it red and overlays and stuff. If ur wanting some help gimme a shout. (fraserrevie@hotmail.com)

yueah thats a good idea/.. i added u umm maby we'llc atch each other on some time.. thanks for the help offer :)

hey chriz sorry about missin u on msn i was sleepin :S ummm thanks for the v-money :D and sorry about the double post i thought it waspast 24 hours but its all good :) anywhooo heres my second sig id like to get C&C's on plss!!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v1...ion2/eddie.jpg

sorry again chriz!!!