fma

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e3...-nsx/fmav2.png

Fairly happy with this one.

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e3...-nsx/butag.jpg

Not so much with this one.

C&C please. Thanks.

look at my fullmetal alchemist one

yea i agree with you. the first one is really nice, but the second one is iffy

i agree w/ xobile. the first i really like. on the second one i like the left side, but not the right side.

First one is sexy; nj on it

2nd one seems too monotone, and the name placing seems random, but again, nice job on the FMA.

loving both!!!! just 2nd is very sharp

Thanks guys. The second is just some random re-arranging of a LP.

Are you Vrael? If so PM me on BE saying that you are Vrael.

Alrighty Myst.

EDIT: Done

K. Good, hes legit. Just an old name thats g4y as hell. LOL

just makin sure. :)

First sig. This is the lesser of the two, imo. Number one, not enough contrast. You have loaded this sig with light colors, but are missing the darks to bring out the lights, and make it easier on the eyes.

Ok, for lighting, i notice that there is a light source top left, and it is producing light as a litghsource should, but does this light not cast shadow? Try to make the right side of the sig darker because the light on the left. Just laws of lighting.

The text on this one should be... more... colored I guess. I would move it a bit to the right, and up a little, and add a hint of yellow into it, just for beauty's sake. more color in the sig, and the face is already too white.


Second. I really like the whole lot of this sig, but i will point out a few things.

Some parts of the c4d render, or brushing, or w/e it happens to be, seems to overlay, like top middle area. It looks a little like the thing was clone stamped, something that you don't really aim for. The text placement here is pretty good, along with the color, but I really don't feel this text that you have chosen here. It is taking up a lot of space, and it is grabbing the attention from your beautiful c4d things.
Overall, this sig is pretty good, and I love the coloringon it.

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K. Good, hes legit. Just an old name thats g4y as hell. LOL

just makin sure. :)
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Lmao!! <3

Thanks for the detailed C&C roofus.

+New

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e3...gdabstract.png

http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e3...abstractv2.png

C&C please

Sharpened as hell; try smoother

I like what you did though.

Thanks spidey ^_^. I need to fix up the colours too, but I&#39;m too lazy atm XD

"ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

its your worst m8

scrap"

LOL

the new one is pretty bad man, scrap it

Done, and done. *deletes from PB*