Alright, yes, this is an advertisement that I'm working on. I won't post a link or anything like that and I'm not here to get members, just to hear some thoughts on the progress of the piece itself, so don't give me any lip :lol: All I'll say so that it makes sense is that the place is called V Supernus. What do you guys think about it so far? I'm interested in hearing about the model, the materials, etc. Also, if anybody has any, I want to hear some ideas about what else I could do with it. I mean like what type of environment should I put it in? Should it just be a floor that's a solid, eye catching color? Should I make it look like an advertisement for a real drink? I'm leaning towards that last idea. Anyway, let's hear your thoughts.
As for what I've done so far, I modelled the can and did some basic materials in about 1-1.5 hours. I made the label in photoshop (I did the VS and the rest is a font). I'm still going to add onto the label, so about that too, if anybody has interesting ideas, I'm all ears.
07-10-2006, 11:02 PM
C K
I'm pretty sure that anyone with more then 1500 posts can put up ads anyways. =p Did BLT talk you into doing something for him? I know I was trying to check out the site awhile ago and it offline.
Anyways I think it looks really nice so far. The modeling of the can looks solid and I like what you did with the label. As for the background or whatever to be honest I'm clueless. Maybe make it in one of the freezer thing at a gas station or something..though that would be abit of work. Not sure though.
07-10-2006, 11:12 PM
imported_Jack
Thanks man :) No, BLT didn't talk me into it, but I've been talking to him and Grant about doing an ad/banner soon and I just decided to have a go at it.
I really really like that gas station freezer idea. That sounds fun. I think I might actually use that one, plus I'll be able to use the models in that one for another piece I planned awhile ago in which I need to model tons and tons of garbage. It's gonna be the most detailed thing I've ever done. That's a different discussion though. Anyway, that's a great idea, thanks again. You and I should collab sometime.
07-10-2006, 11:22 PM
C K
Oh okay. Yeah I haven't talked to the Grant fellow but BLT seems like a pretty good guy from the bit we talked. =)
Great. Glad you like the idea.
I tend not to do collabs but Yeah sure. We might be able to do something together at some point. It would be interesting. =)
07-11-2006, 12:23 AM
Elektrik
So your on vS?
Awsome ad, needs more lighting IMO.
07-11-2006, 01:04 AM
imported_Jack
Elektrik - Yep, joined vS a few days ago. I agree that it needs more lighting, this is just to show what I've done so far ;)
CK - Grant is Victorinox. PS: I'm still going to call you CK.
07-11-2006, 01:11 AM
C K
Oh okay and thats fine. =)
07-11-2006, 05:32 AM
sythe
i think you should make the environment a fridge, i like what you have done there, very nice. I think i'll be able to give you more crit, once you have done the environment.
07-11-2006, 05:33 AM
Kyoushima
I think it would be better if it had more shine to it, like that it reflects more light :)
Still, its awesome man!
07-11-2006, 02:03 PM
static
I think it needs to have some barbed wire wrapped around it and some nutrition facts on the can. And also some cracks around the bottom of it.
Wow, I read your mind Jack! :D
07-11-2006, 02:15 PM
//jimma
I like it. I just dont like the VS it looks odd but that minor to fix :D.
07-11-2006, 05:52 PM
imported_Jack
Thanks for the comments :)
Jimma - I like the VS lol From what I heard, the guys I've shown at vSupernus like it too, so sorry to disappoint but I'm keeping that there :D
07-11-2006, 06:15 PM
//jimma
NP it doesnt bother me that much. Its a REALLY real looking can. I think you 3D work is really well done
07-12-2006, 08:19 PM
Marcus aka Sonny Soprano
Yeah, this is cool.
07-13-2006, 10:08 AM
$hadowwra!th
Maybe you could add drops of water :)
You see that on all ads from cola etc.