MOUTH.WIDE.SHUT rcc pls

what you think?

http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m...deshutcopy.jpg

http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m...shutBWcopy.jpg

Seems very flat and too bright, text and lines don't really flow with the sig that well.

Nice job on the blending though

^ looks just fine to me. i like it. the text is cool too, maybe try some texture on it.

I'm with aristo. It's flat. Depth it up a bit.
The text is ok. The lines arent needed imo. The pastel colours don't work imo either.

The sig is pretty solid most of this is personal opinions.

I like it but i feel like the text is a bit too big. Almost like you got two focals, which I'm not really a fan of.

Other than that it's very cool, coloring looks awesome.

i think you guys are being a bit formulaic. this is fresh.

just one problem with aristo's comment: where is it too bright ? and yeah i agree it might be a little flat but depth was hard to do coz the guy was a render and i had to make it seem like there was a wooden bg (i took it from a stock photo).

I LOVE the colors, too bad its a bit flat though :S

blending is cool...iunno about flat?
only thing IMO is text..a bit big like papa said..
but the idea is ahem..'fresh:p' but yeah..the idea is great
its a great piece

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Originally Posted by Jeff

i think you guys are being a bit formulaic. this is fresh.

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I know it is fresh, it's new and It's different. However I do think the text is a bit distracting from the render. It's huge and to me looks liek a second focal point.
Just putting my opinion out there, doesn't mean he has to listen to it or act on it either.

of course, it's not like i said everyone else's opinion was invalid or wrong.