Dragon Ball Z. Goku. SOTW

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I give to you my latėst. it also goes for SOTW.
So any tips would be very appriciated :)
http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/9493/sig58pj0.jpg

It is looking very messy and hard ti see properly i think this could be fixed with some topazing. The two light sources is throwing off the lighting. Text is good apart from goku which just doesn't fit at all. Needs a bit more work imo garis i like the link to the sotw theme though.

yeah sorta messy.
u could make the focal a bit more clearer.

agreed.
everything about the focal sems kinda bright, no depth.

btw i love the effects at the sides tho.
forgot to mention.

I like it as it is, DRAGON FIST!

Okey guys. I hope I will fix it soon. :)

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Originally Posted by ratchetnclank

It is looking very messy and hard ti see properly i think this could be fixed with some topazing. The two light sources is throwing off the lighting. Text is good apart from goku which just doesn't fit at all. Needs a bit more work imo garis i like the link to the sotw theme though.

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and where do you see two light sources? :eek:

UPDATED.
removed white stuff around the hand.
render is more clearly now.
GOKU is removed also.
http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/7928/sig58si9.jpg

I like the blending! Maybe clean the brushes around the text? But it looks solid. Awesome sig.

It's still pretty messy. Theres a few two many effects over the render. I would duplicate the render bring it to the top lower the opacity and mask out the bottom. It will work better focal wise.