Hellgate

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Topaz <3

lose the white and it will look good

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Originally Posted by B

lose the white and it will look good

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/agree but very sexy tut ^^

Not digging this 1 man, to much going on imo. Blur some places on the outsides. Text is good tho like always :D.

Agree with all above but deffo agree with get rid of the white man its not nice :( make it black or something dark it would look the smex

It looks like crap on a dark background XD

nahhh.

I like it ratchet.
it looks. decent.

Topaz is really addictive, isn't it? xDDDDD

hmn, its kk, the prob is, too much going on the sides while the middle wich should be the focal point is almost empty compared to the rest.
You should "cut" his arms...Resize the canvas (less width) and the render (make it bigger).
But thats my opinion.
overall its a good sig, and yes, topaz makes it easy.

lew is pretty right with that. im getting distracted by every direction and have no idea wot is going on. im also trying to figure out which part was part of the render.

i feeel the two c4d's on his left/right hands (if thats what they are) are kinda distractin me..apart from that its a nice sig..oh and does anybody know where i can get topaz from?

Try to add some flow ratchet.
I think your biggest problem is though is that you have sooo many clipping masks smack dab ontop of the renders chest. look at it, the only thing you can really see is the head. Your supposed to blend in the render not cover it XD. haha so just get rid of a couple of the cliping masks and i think it will help a lot.

the c4d's are aweosme but i still think you need to work on your flow. WHite is tought to work with and i applaud you for that, but i think this is one of those sigs where a dark black or charcaol might look better.

Finally your hellgate text is terribly off. Try a font like Agency FB, or Fire eye GF. Those two fonts would set this off in the right color. (err sry if those aren't the exact names, not on my computer right now and had to come up with them from memory.)

Not bad though, it looks pretty decent, not the usual par though.