SOTW Entry - ORANGE

Hey C&C this entry please :D:D

Thanks people

http://img162.imageshack.us/img162/9...ature68wd1.png

Dan.

PS. Look at my other post New Fear Tag

i need some comments on it because im struggling lol

dont really know what im looking at. and its still really washed out try making depth.

I dont know how you used the stock to get that :|

Lacks depth though, not bad.

It's a c4d with really bright light? I don't get the purpose or see the stock =\.

Colours are nice however

I should say its awesome abstract work mate :)

really really great work zole.
am. you used absolutely equal font and size for the text in two last lines.
I think its a bit off. I mean. change last line font or something.
now, your text looks like. am. its too much for me. (dman. dont know how to express exactly in english) ://

and orange is too dark a bit. make ir a bit brighter imo. :)
I like the eptyness and black in the right it fits, ut fil a bit and very with low opacity the black of left side.

gj

For me its your best yet that I have seen awsome work.

Text is great to so gotta work on my text more.

I'm not feeling it, I don't care for the smudging, =/ I think you can do a lot better.

To explain this sig ive take apart of the render and changed it to an abstracty feel because i felt like it i was going for that sort of thing so yeah im happy with this so i dont get why ratchet and alias are saying that the stock is that bright light (aka blue thing in his hands and it has part of him above to the left :S) and it has got depth there is a BG behind, cant see it great, and the C4D is above the render onto his hands.... it has quite abit of depth you just need to look.

Thank you for your C&C's sorry about that outbreak i just needed to explain more to others before you all comments my fault :D

Thanks

your doing the minimum of depth though, like the c4d looks like it has opacity on it and the only part of the little background i can see is the dudes jacket which is only visible for like maybe 1.5 in. plus its like you just took a black paint brush and brushed everything around it.

I don't know what everyone is whining about! This is an awesome sig! Who cares if you can't see the stock in it, just coment on what you see anyway. The only thing I think needs a bit of work is the lighting. I think it's too bright.

I also agree with Elramo. In set stock, as long as he used it, it is valid. You don't have to be able to see the whole thing. I think its a great display of abstract, the only thing is that the lightsource burns my eyes. Great job. :D

i actually kinda like it
just too bright in areas

but im loving the mood and feeling of it
and great colors (of maybe im bias because i love warm colors)

but yeah
work on brightness and you could have a great abstract piece

This is extremely dark. I'm having a hard time seeing it clearly. I know it's abstract but this dark makes it extreme. Brighten it upand it'd be much much better.