August Burns Red.

Yet another new style for I. It's pretty simple to say the least.

http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f3...oGFX/abrsv.png

good text,nice render,nice flow too,I'm just not feeling the "WOW" effect..sorry.good for a begginer tho

i agree with suddu, also if you are using colored renders on b&w bg, you should match the color or make it darker. It throws everything off.

Bad ass band, But I like what you did, I just think it could have been executed better with the C4D and Clipping masks.

Nice, i like it :D 7/10

we dont rate on this forum XD and WAUGH ! ITS Nice only the text ruining it

Thanks for the feedback everyone.

Here is a different version. Only thing changed is the text though.

http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f3...oGFX/abrsn.png

i like the first one better...but they are both good, good job bro keep it up

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Originally Posted by xJTRx

i agree with suddu, also if you are using colored renders on b&w bg, you should match the color or make it darker. It throws everything off.

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I personally Disagree I think It adds a nice amount of contrast to the image and Is well executred overall.

remove text altogether, would look better imo

the only thing that bothers me is the lighting, theirs light on his head but it's not coming from anywhere,

add a light source that fits with that lighting on his head

I like Gallagher's idea of just removing the text all together.

Also added a lightsource. I guess it would make since to have one on there.

http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f3...GFX/abrsyo.png

It is much better without the text. I actually really really like this.
Love the C4D's that you used, and that colour on the Black and White
looks very amazing.
Splatters look pretty good and the flow is great.
Adding text is always the hardest, ask Papa, he is the text master. :D

some tags don't need text, and the c4d looks like a c4d.. where as it should give the effect of a lighting.. anyways great work..good choice of colours