ratchet and lewk present shadow lurker :D

http://i252.photobucket.com/albums/h...adowlurker.jpg
V3:
http://i252.photobucket.com/albums/h...owlurkerv3.jpg

v2:
http://i252.photobucket.com/albums/h...owlurker-1.jpg

Cnc laydeez.

love the whole thing accepttt

the text looks squashed, i aint likey :(

That font, it really needs work. The fact that it is pink and and birght blue really worsens it because your eyes go straight towards it.

I like the c4d's on this one but it's too empty. Add something to it, make it more exciting right now it lacks that punch, even with the bright colors.

great job on the blending though thoughs C4d's work flawlessly.
It's decent but overall needs a lot of work.

Great work.

Loving the c4d work so much realy fits in well.

I really like most of it, a bit empty because of the black background on the top left and top right.
Hate the text, you need to fix that right away!!! :D
Other than that, it's pretty damn fine!

V2:
http://i252.photobucket.com/albums/h...owlurker-1.jpg

I think you missed the text again, I still just think that you need a simple font without that colour, it just distracts way too much. :D

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Originally Posted by Ptka

I think you missed the text again, I still just think that you need a simple font without that colour, it just distracts way too much. :D

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What colour?

I've been trying loads and you either cant see them or they dont fit.

do a less sharper font and lower opacity :S

This is a hard one to put text on, just try lower opacity I guess, a simpler font and a less bright colour, maybe a darker blue. Doesn't matter if it's not that visible, as long as it's not the first thing people see when they look at it. :D

V3:

third time lucky

http://i252.photobucket.com/albums/h...owlurkerv3.jpg

third one works well with the text.
i love the dark blue and purp colours.
nicely done...like papa sed the c4ds are flawless...amazing stuff.
a bit empty on some parts.
but nice work bro.