kind of dark sig

Please comment so I can improve it :)
I'm not good at brushing and blending... This is my first dark\grunge sig.

ub!k

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...gs/darksig.gif

It scared me when she opened her eyes. And I saw that picture of that girl on DA. She's pretty cute. :D The brushing is ok..not much depth to it. You might also want to adjust the text. I can't read it at all.

oooo i like that, lil big for my taste and ur name doesnt quite fit the theme, but its nice cool work.


EDIT:whoops forgot to say i also like the eye animation.

Thanx for your comments, but how can I add more depth?
And for the text and my name I didn't knew what to do just tried that, gonna change them.

ub!k

i thinks its cool but it needs better text ;)

I changed the text , any better?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6.../SIG-DARK3.gif

Text is way to dark. Get rid of the black around the edges and change the text color.

agree with Juicy , better that first one, but text is too dark make it lighter , its hard to read...

Thanx dick and juicy for your comments, i've lightened the text, hope it's better. But I' will leave it like that for a while , I'm fed up with taht one :)
Thanx again for your usefull advices.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6.../SIG-D2ARK.gif

yeah now its beautifull nice job ;)

Kinda cool but not really my taste

Good job. The text does not really match the sig. Also the white around the image needs to be gone. Looks nice.. and good animation.