thug girl

made a sig:)

http://i40.tinypic.com/35cijoj.jpg

CnC?

those effects are pretty freckiin schweet man. One thing... Floating head. Lightings good.. efects are pretty frekiin schweet, text is ok... not great but ok, colors mostly go together, there is definitly some flow. FLOATING. HEAD. (IMO)

i like it but it is a little overtopassed and floating head xD

i wouldnt say floating head tbh, it looks like a fluffy hood over the head :P

good job, its grreat :D

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Originally Posted by Popje

i like it but it is a little overtopassed and floating head xD

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i didn't used topaz, stock was like that

hmmm i beg to differ with the rest ad for the whole signature itself it is pretty solid and i have been watching your stuff and i can see you have most blending and effects techniques down, which is good.


im no fan of this one for start the background is completely dull and empty the redner just seems completely slapped on and makes no depth affect of all, as for the effects in the front i think they are over burned and again you took little time to blend em in im suposing they are C4D's.

text IMO doesn't fit but it was a nice attempt maybe some other place idk overall the sig compared to other stuff i have seen about you seems pretty default and lacking some work.

with more work this one could be pretty tight but right now i dont quite like it sorry flatty

The effects would be badass if they where blended in more.

The whole floating head complaint before doesn't really apply on this sig guys. FHS is more like for smaller heads when they are just randomly slapped around. This is big and you can easily pick it out. the effects are clearly centered on it too so it's defeintly not FHS.

However The compo on this is horrible. Read the rule of thirds and follow it. You should stop placing the render in the middle, i see that happening to often at the void.

The effects are ncie but IMO that redish color don't rly belong wiht that orangey yellow brown.

not bad overall.

FHS may be a little hard to apply to this one, but imo anything without at least shoulders is FHS because then it just looks like you decapitated someone and put em in a sig.

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Originally Posted by Firescorpio

im no fan of this one for start the background is completely dull and empty the redner just seems completely slapped on and makes no depth affect of all, as for the effects in the front i think they are over burned and again you took little time to blend em in im suposing they are C4D's.

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That's the first thing I seemed to notice. The background looked bland. It could be the choice of colour, but it looks incomplete.

Also to the top right of the head, there's a horizontal line. What caused that?!?

It does look good, although I do think it could be better.

Well...it has pretty much all been covered. For me, the only thing I can add is really the text. The font isn't too hateful, but it's placement sucks. I agree about papa with the comment about composition. Scootch that junk around and it'll help a lot.

Sorry, your works not junk at all, I meant that figuratively.

Agree with Papa on this one, the floating head doesn't apply because the parka goes over and around, it just looks it's a thick hood. :D
Great effects, a little too obvious, I don't like the background at all, it's a bit TOO bland.
Text makes me sad, you used to be so much better at text.