Sniper Insane

Yo this is my sotw entry! :p so good PAPA decided to give me another chance to edit my entry :D
http://i458.photobucket.com/albums/q...uu/ISanity.jpg

I really like this one, has a very edgy feel.
Very bright though, you should really make it darker, it's just a bit too crazy.
The effects around his right shoulder are very nice, those might be replicated on the other side for a nice effect.
Text is cool, the colouring of it really works.
I just think it's pretty good all around, just needs to be less yellow and bright. :D

Thanks :D first time i got so many compliments for a sig here :p

lower the contrast and it should be fine.

i changed it look at my sig! :D Even gota tut up on request

tooo chaotic for me :(

I agree, I think it is too busy on the eyes. It would be awesome if you could just get the render and the effects surrounding it on, say, a black background. Other than that it looks good.

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Originally Posted by Sp!t

tooo chaotic for me :(

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i have been reading your CnC's and they are very poor spit try adding more to them to help the artist.

and yes buu this is very chaotic it seems you tried to place allot of effects on this one to the background and after doign a complete world of effects, you where to tired to blend in the render, so the sig has no depth.

from starters there are allot of white spots which take from the focal point and distract me, overall too bright i would get rid of these white spots.

now as to how to make out which effects to use and which not too my recommendation is, go with overall look, alone it might look good but think of how it enhances that whole flow, depth. from there on you can add allot of effects yet it wil lbe subtle and gentle to the eye. with all the chaos going on text is practically impossible to read, but in generall its hard to focus on the whole sig, keep at it buu some more work and tries will get you there

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Originally Posted by Firescorpio

i have been reading your CnC's and they are very poor spit try adding more to them to help the artist.

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I sent you PM with explaining of my comments here :)

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Originally Posted by Sp!t

I sent you PM with explaining of my comments here :)

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I hope that PM wasn't negative. Fire is doing it right, when givin cnc you need to help the artist be telling the person what you dislike or how to fix it, rather than just the negatives.

okayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy And so i need the definitions for the folowing word

Chaotic>>
Depth>>
Flow>>

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Originally Posted by Papa

I hope that PM wasn't negative. Fire is doing it right, when givin cnc you need to help the artist be telling the person what you dislike or how to fix it, rather than just the negatives.

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Maybe :) My reason why I sometime write simple comment is that my mother language is czech,not english ;-) I'm trying to write helpfull comments,but sometime i dont have the right words,so I must write it easily ;-) On otherside my posts in czech look like this one :) To the future I'll try to improve it ;-) Have a nice day :D