I usually nitpick my work alot. but i like this one =]
Gave up on good looking text, so i dont think it needed it xD
CnC? :D
03-24-2009, 08:50 PM
Immortal.
dude looks badass
the smudging on the left is a bit forced.
sorta smooth that out
rest is mint.
text would look nice.
love it man.
good work.
03-24-2009, 08:54 PM
Fuzer
Ill give it a shot for the left side, and i would love to put text on it, only thing is i dont want to ruin it =[ ill try something and see how it looks =]
thanks for your input immortal <3 much appriciated ^^
03-24-2009, 09:01 PM
Immortal.
no probs bud.
here to help
03-24-2009, 09:38 PM
Fuzer
Updated, would like to point out that im no good at text though >.<
03-24-2009, 09:44 PM
KRS25
The text looks fine, its really not that bad at all. I personally would've moved the text out just a little bit so its not overlapping the render. Great work it looks really good!
03-24-2009, 09:52 PM
Bob_magic
I don't know if it's just me but i think the LL (Lower Left) corner just beneath the render would've been a perfect spot for the render. Also where the renders arm Blends ( on the LL side ) looks a little dirty but aside from that I'd give it a 7/10
03-25-2009, 04:33 AM
BonesMa
V2 is awsome.
Love it only thing I would change is less smudging on the right arm
03-25-2009, 04:49 AM
Bob_magic
that's the spot i was pointing out
03-25-2009, 06:40 AM
Fuzer
ill get v3 up soon <3 thanks btw
03-25-2009, 10:01 AM
Papa
V1. V2 is okay but that thick earth looking font isn't helping this at all. rly needs work. The smudging is great. great job blending him in> i just wish there was a tad bit more.
I'm not kidding if you are into smudging great! but you MUST check out naito's work from planetrenders. His work will give you a whole different idea on how to approach a smudge sig + add flow.
He's got amazing Use of smugding, and i'm not saying this to you because you smudging isn't good, cause it's not your smudgign is great, some of the best i've seen around ehre in awhile. But you should get a feel for how other artists are adding flow.
Overall just neeeds more flow.
03-25-2009, 10:28 AM
Fuzer
thanks, ill be sure to check him out, im always looking for ways to improve, but i havent been back in the game for long, kinda feels like im back at square one >.< and as for the font, yeah, i liked v1 better, i didnt want to do text really, it ruined it..