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Hey guys. Followed the same tutorial as my previous signature but experimented a bit more with C4D's and lighting. I think this one has turned out a lot better than the last one. What do you guys think?
Outcome:
http://i40.tinypic.com/o0ov21.jpg
C&C please. :)
In all honesty, i dont see any lighting =/ sorry Other than that, your getting there, I think the thing you have to work on is negative space, you have good coloring going here with the red and blues, but you have way too much black negative space, try reading a tut on smudging, i think it would help out your sigs and style alot.
Keep up the good work ^^
Thanks for thr feedback. I know, I'm not very good on the whole smudging thing because I don't have a clue what I'm supposed to smudge! I will read up on some tutorials and post some more work later on. :)
P.S - Is the text okay? :D
the text could use a little bit of work its kind of dark and plain.
nice sig though yeah just work on filling the black!
Thanks for the comment. :) This is deffinantly one of my better signatures.
the text is on the right line, but the font you use, while looking basic, has to go with the sig, i dont like the font you used for your name, but other than that, its good
You are getting good at this :p The text could be worked on a little bit and like the others said the black needs to be filled in a little bit lol.. I love it though. Its better than mine lol :)
It's not better than yours. I'd really like to know how you got yours like you did because I just added loads of random C4D's and then whacked a render on top, made some new layers and overlayed them etc. Stop de-grading your work, that can drag you down in future work and there really isn't anything to de-grade it for.
I only have 1 C4D in it... 3 layers for the render ;) thats it :)
So? It's still turned out amazing. Mines got 3 C4D's in it, a total of 8 layers and yet it still needs improvements. Yours is close to perfect. It's just a learning step. :) We all get good at things after practice - even if it takes years.
Yea well you know what they say, "Practise Makes Perfect" ;) :p
you could blen it a little more and the text stands out a bit ( i cant gice any advice on that tho i suck at text lol) where did you get that render though i would love to use it
well theres the problem. it definitely sounds like your not nearly spending enough time on it. you gotta experiment with filters, brushes, smudging, pen tooling. you learn a lot from just experimenting with these things. i just finished making a sig and i got 36 layers. soo you need to spend alot more time with your work. you need to spend more then 30 minutes on it.
I did spend more than half an hour on it, don't forget you cna merge layers. ;) Thanks for the advice though, I do need to work on brushes, smudging etc. I am fairly new to the whole GFXing stuff so at the moment I'm just experimenting to find a style I'm comfortable with.
thats ok. but why merge your layers? you shouldnt merge them unless your sure you DONT want to change anything about them. the more you merge the less you can change later on. I posted 3 of my tutorials on here if you would like to take a look at them.
Oh, no I never actually merged any layers ^^ I was just saying you can merge layers that's why I put "the cheeky ;)" haha. I will take a look. Thanks.
no problem, +rep if i helped :-p
The spiderman text isn't bad - but it's an obvious choice. Text below it isn't really nice. But it could be the choice of colour that is effecting the way people view it... try messing around.
Don't see any real lighting to it sorry, looks very dark.
Render is place nicely, and with work you could make it into a nice signature.
Any suggestions on the comments you've given me? I'm not sure how to do lighting. :| Need to look at some tutorials, this was mainly to play around with the C4D's. I'm just messing around with certain parts of things then eventually will combind it all in to one signature.
