WIP...need some suggestions

i need some suggestions on what to add to this. its a shirt design

Click Here for earlier version.

current version:
http://img104.imageshack.us/img104/7...tshirtcopy.png

I think it needs a background behind the Heart. Perhaps a place that those tentacles are coming from? some interaction?

mmm. ok ok. got any ideas on that though? i was sorta thinkin of adding red c4d's or sumthing

also the lines are supposed to be coming from inside of the heart.

you think i should change the drops too? change their sizes so they dont look the same.

make the lines flow out of the heart better.. other than that it's a sick design

Change the drops(size), yes.
Imo it would look better it the holes wasn't blurred.
And maybe drop the red stroke on the tentacles.
Along with this, i'd say keep the colors simple.
Nice job, keep it up

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Originally Posted by Helix

make the lines flow out of the heart better.. other than that it's a sick design

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hmmmm... what do you mean?

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Originally Posted by silentshadow

Change the drops(size), yes.
Imo it would look better it the holes wasn't blurred.
And maybe drop the red stroke on the tentacles.
Along with this, i'd say keep the colors simple.
Nice job, keep it up

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im gonna keep the red glow on the lines. idk why i just think that it suits it. ^_^

the holes arent really blurred either, i just used a soft brush. if i should make them differently how should i do it?

use a hard brush instead?

Drop your stroke size, go light on c4d if you use it. Spatter brushes would suit this if its for a shirt. Great work!

the blood drops look sorta blurred to me. I think u should make a blooddrop right as its going into the blood pool on the bottom. might look cool :)

I think you should drop the glow on the tentacles, and then try making the drops more realistic, right now they seem kinda blurry. Also i would love to have another bg ? but it in some sort of contekst (dunno if thats the right word) so that it doesnt look so empty. I would create a scene, simple yearh but something more than just a white bg.

i worked on this a bit more last night. ive updated the picture

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Originally Posted by kailu

the blood drops look sorta blurred to me. I think u should make a blooddrop right as its going into the blood pool on the bottom. might look cool :)

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i see what your saying bout the drops. i'll try to re-do them without feathering them.

i'll TRY some splatter brushes, but i'm really a big fan using just brushes to make a background, havent really done that since i used GIMP o.0