Lare Art

Im not sure where to post this, so ill just post it here, even thought it's not a sig or an avatar. You can move if you like :P

Okay here it is, it's my first type of thing like this:

http://i658.photobucket.com/albums/u...y-p0ofs/la.png

I did follow a tut so you may of seen somthing similar :P
C&C please :)

Should be in digital art ;)

Nice job, I like the text and everything but the tree seems really out of place and like another focal to me. The birds are fine I'd keep them. It's not very original but it's well executed. Good job, just not feeling the tree.

That is nice cheesy
Love the diff colours and the text

Im glad you like the text, it was hard to find a good one that fit with the piece. I thought it was a bit confusing because the letters arn't clear but i thought it looked alright tbh :)
thanks.

i agree the tree looks strange!

overall pretty good man

Thanks for the comments, i cant do nothing about the tree since i forgot to save layers :(
but ill remember next time haha.

I think you did a good job achieving what you tried to. This would be a great DA id xD i dont really know what to improve so im just gonna leave it with that :D keep going dude

thats cool but i dont like the way you colored it. Imo the colors should be exclusive if it's a vector... post a v2?

he cant he didn't save layers, but you should try doing something similar with the feedback!

I kinda like the coloring & borders :)
The effect from the h/I are pretty good aswell.
Just dont like the birds and tree too much, but overal GJ I guess ;)

Thanks for all the comments, if i did save the layers :( i would have tooken the tree out, maybe experement with different colours. I would of kept the birds though, without them i think it would be waaay to empty.

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Originally Posted by navb01

he cant he didn't save layers, but you should try doing something similar with the feedback!

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just because you didn't save layers doesn't mean you can't change the colors afterwards.. LOL...

and wtf is this supposed to mean
"you should try doing something similar with the feedback!"

do you have a problem?

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Originally Posted by cheesy GFX

Thanks for all the comments, if i did save the layers :( i would have tooken the tree out, maybe experement with different colours. I would of kept the birds though, without them i think it would be waaay to empty.

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yeah definitely. Make sure to always save your psd files

I was in a rush when i made it tbh, it was late and i needed sleep haha. I'll probably try out the same technique sometime and will try to take on what you have mentioned. Thanks everybody.

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Originally Posted by cheesy GFX

I was in a rush when i made it tbh, it was late and i needed sleep haha. I'll probably try out the same technique sometime and will try to take on what you have mentioned. Thanks everybody.

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well there's the problem..

>>> never.. rush... !

take your time and you'll be much more satisfied

Yeah that's pretty cool. although the green over the yellow tends to look like you drew on the screen with a highlighter. i like the texture in the BG.