Hey.
Me and splinter decided to do a collab.
Please tell us where we went wrong, what to do and wht's good:)
http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/4...collabcopy.jpg
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Hey.
Me and splinter decided to do a collab.
Please tell us where we went wrong, what to do and wht's good:)
http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/4...collabcopy.jpg
Da birdy plane :P
i like it. :D i hav no idea how to do these so [Please do not rate unless asked to]
Unfortunately, the bird is really low quality, and that hurts it more than anything. The additions could have been meshed a little bit better against it, but unless you're using gradient maps, you're gonna have trouble conveying a rough surface, like feathers, underneath or through a logo or emblem.
Another thing I noticed was the right wing looks ALOT longer than the left. I guess the length came from the length of the plane wing, which is understandable, but if you stand back and glance at it taking in the perspective, they seem off. They also seem to be at different angles...
The other thing was the typo. I'm not sure what I can say to improve it, but I think it could have been incorporated a little bit differently.
Other than those things, nice concept and nice job. I like how you went with the idea, and produced a fairly respectable result. Congrats guys.
Yeah the plane wing was hard to get into a good size comparison, but thanks anyways. We'll probably work on it now ;)
lol, i like it bird plane :p
The parts could have been blended better.
It's a cool idea but it really isn't killing it for me.
It looks like you had the idea, but you rushed it.
The picture is quite low quality to begin with. and at first glance it looks like a bird with a square wing.
Now if you'd incorporated and engine on the regularly shaped bird wing i think it might've worked better.
but that's just me.
Looks pretty cool but isn't it weird for a bird to have two different types of wings? LIke the idea though. :p
yeah maybe use a picture of higher quality!
It's pretty hard to find a stock of a bird facing the exact way we wanted, and this was the closest we could find. It's also harder to find a plane in the exact same viewing of the bird we did, so that in mind, we actually did pretty well.
yeah im not saying its bad just looks a little pixely!
I completely agree with Navb
I agree aswell with the others, i like your idea, but i think it could have been executed better :D right now it seems kinda meh because of the overall low quality of the image, i would love to see a remake and then use hours to find a good high res image and then try again because its not a bad idea guys.
Yea i'm with solaris. This would be soo muchbetter if the bird was better quality. Also the cut of the plane, is pretty jagged. So i think it'd be betetr had you just used higher quality stocks.
The windows, i really didn't get that they were windows. I would have prefered like sombody looking out one or something. WOuld have helped it a lot. Maybe try to help blend the windows morewith a better chop.
Overall needs some work.
It pops out to much from the background especially the wing.
The idea is cool thou.
that's a great concept but imo needs more detail to make it more like an airplane
