Silent photomaip bird

Hey people. I need some advices from you here. Cuz' i'm doing a photomanip.
But i'm not satisfied. I think it's a bit empty. So... What to do?

Thanks in advance

http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/8...birdiecopy.jpg

the lighting on the beak is off imo, maybe remedy that?
and maybe make like a flock, like put more in the bg

Yeah I agree with soggy here darken the underside of the beak and maybe add a flock.

Great stuff tho.

yea it looks awsome and i was gonna say add darkness to the beak but the flock idea is awsome

nice one silent i agree with the beak though :)

Dont blend it in, really. When you are so close to it, no way you can see those clouds ABOVE the wings.
Pay some attention to the lightning. The mouth-thing has no lightning while the wings do, which isnt logical :) But this is in general wrong with lightning. Other then that, nice concept :)

hehe, pretty nice.
You did a great job blending the wings in.
Only thing I don't like are the colors of the sky going to a darker green like that.

the lines need to flow more.. it's crooked.. imo bring the bird head up more to match the level of the tail piece

Thanks alot everyone:)

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Originally Posted by Helix

the lines need to flow more.. it's crooked.. imo bring the bird head up more to match the level of the tail piece

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I followed the curve from the original nose of the plane.

The beak needs to be blended with the plane better.
Yea, a flock would be great with this.
I'm really not sure what else you could add besides that....

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Originally Posted by silentshadow

Thanks alot everyone:)



I followed the curve from the original nose of the plane.

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okay.. but look at it.. it's like the bird is bent in the middle..

Hmm i guess you're right. thank you:)