F A N T A S Y

http://i562.photobucket.com/albums/s...LP_Versi-3.jpg

CnC please. This was my battle entry for Chaos against Et Tu.
Help would be much appreciated. By the way this is my first LP that i have finished got stuck with the last attempt so be nice.

The end result was great mate.

The c4d work realy looks and works well.

any more comments?please:)

i think it looks pretty great man!

love the effects!

I love the effects on that, it's great. Can't say anything bad about it.

Thanks, finally my hard work has prodyced something half dercent xD

any more comments/ suggestions

I'm pretty sure the effect you was going for was wings so I'll comment based on this - if I'm wrong correct me and I'll edit.

As they were wings, you obviously needed some depth for them. The C4Ds look good but they look really flat and out of place with the depth of the render/stock used. There should be shadows/highlights in certain places to blend it, whereas this is just a C4D on lighten or whatever. At the moment imo it looks like she's floating, and the C4Ds seem like a focal grabber. Just my opinions though.

Agree with splinter here
pretty good piece though

ty:)

shame about her face.
could always get annother models face and paste it on blend it i etc.

she sort ruins the LP

effects are okay. colourings nice.

good LP :)

Thanks xD as i said i worked really hard on it:)