Rukia

http://i40.tinypic.com/2liu639.jpg

V.2
http://i43.tinypic.com/2d936ma.jpg

i'm back to Cs3.. i just couldn't get the lighting good :( also, i made her a smile ( drew it myself.. ) and i recolored her, if you don't believe me here's the original pic: http://i40.tinypic.com/2cngk5l.jpg


CnC The face please:)

No offence but this is a bad sig
Not feeling the sig and the lighting is done badly
Text is oky. Read sum tut, it will certainly help u

pfft, read my text next time? i already sayd it's a bad sig and the lighting is off i couldn't get it 2 work in CS3..
i just wanted to know what people think of the facial part because i made the mouth my own..

Bad text, bad lighting. Good effects.

Effects look good in this one. I'm guessing you used brushes? Pretty refreshing to see someone use brushes for effects around here. Almost everybody uses C4D nowadays. However, the sig is TOO dark as a whole. There's nothing to bring out the "wow" in the effects since it's so dark.

Did you put a layer adjustment like a gradient map over your light source layer? Because your light source looks a little strange. Try putting your light source layer in front and see how it goes.

Change your text, I suggest reading a tut or two on this.

You could do better with that smile. I don't know what to say about the recolouring, I thought the original colours were also pretty good. Overall, it was an ok piece of work. The lighting kills it for me. Go read a couple of tuts. Trust me, you'll learn loads.

lulz.. thanks for ur guys feedback tho but PLEASE READ WHAT I SAY... i just wanna know the "FACIAL" part the other things are like done in 10 sec i was mainly focusing on the FACE...

it was my first time drawing something with a pentablet ( normally i do it on paper.. ) and i really want some feedback on it..

lol guys hes talking about the face only XD

Dude, you asked for CnC. You're getting it. You didn't specify which part of your sig you wanted CnC on. We're just here to help. Next time, try to specify, instead of posting rude replies to people who are earnestly trying to give you some good critique in hope that you can improve your piece of work. Sheesh.

Oh, and wouldn't it be easier if you just posted a picture of her with the redrawn mouth and recoloured clothes instead of a SIG, if you didn't want people to give you critique on your SIG? Or just remove the effects and lighting completely if you didn't want people to say anything about it? But that's beside the point. Since like I said, you didn't specify which part of your sig you wanted critique on.

Btw, I did give you critique on your recolouring and redrawn mouth. Looks like you need to read what people say as well.

i did and i actually sayd "THANKS FOR THE FEEDBACK" -.-" and if you find that rude well /golfclap doesn't bother me.. i just found it funny to add some extra stuff in it

Really? Well, this didn't look very polite to me.

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Originally Posted by theclan10

but PLEASE READ WHAT I SAY... i just wanna know the "FACIAL" part the other things are like done in 10 sec i was mainly focusing on the FACE...

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For one, you're using caps on "facial" and "face", which is stressing the fact that you only want cnc on the face even though you never specified. Two, you capped "please read what I say" which doesn't make sense since, like I said, you never said anything about only wanting cnc on the face. + it sounds a little like you're reprimanding us for not doing "what you said" since you're capping your words.

Calm down ladies ;P As for critique on your mouth, i dont think it looks like it should be there, it looks a little un natural for anime, so meh...

Stop arguing now, I'm sure it's all just one big mis-understanding. The mouth has been re-worked well, I couldn't have done that but I'm bad at GFXing. :P Good job.

This mouth is noticeably edited. Try to smooth it out a bit more, its still a little blurry and jagged.

You all just need to calm down. Good work, keep it up.

V2 ADDED **note** thanks for the feedback all i tried to use you're tips & hints.. CnC plz:)

Still a bit jagged around the edges and on the teeth.

The lighting and effects are much much better. Good work!

THanks samuel, but what do you exactly mean with "jagged"? and how do you think i could fix that?

I'm not being rude, but I'll give it to you straight : I suggest reading some tuts and doing something better overall, especially if you don't want such bad CnC.

I look at it this way : Why is she ON a sig, if you only want CnC for her face? Why didn't you just edit the render? Plopping something you want help with onto an ugly background that took you 10 seconds to make is just going to make your work on her face look uglier.

Now, onto what you want CnCed... I'm not sure if you're wondering about recoloring on her face, or wether or not you even did that, so I'll just say I wouldn't bother even mentioning recoloring... it tends to be a byproduct of sig making, very little renders end up their original colors in the final product.

And finally the mouth.. Well, it's not TERRIBLE, to be honest I couldn't probably do any better, considering I have no idea how to draw Anime. :P That being said, I'm sure you could have got a result 1000x better if you just cut a smile from some other typical Anime chick and plopped it onto her, and made the skin colors the same. The mouth you have in now looks a little like an awkward smile, and her facial structure overall doesn't say "smiling", so I think it looks a bit weird. That's why it's hard to just edit in a different mouth and keep the original facial expression.

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THanks samuel, but what do you exactly mean with "jagged"? and how do you think i could fix that?

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Jagged probably means that it doesn't look smooth. Pixely maybe. Not smooth meaning sort of like the shape of the letter "w". Just many times over.
So it'll be like "wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww", k that's jagged. Or something like that anyway.

How to fix this... Hmm... Perhaps, try smudging? Or gausian blurring a dupe of the mouth and placing it behind the original.

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Originally Posted by _.Pac-man._

No offence but this is a bad sig
Not feeling the sig and the lighting is done badly
Text is oky. Read sum tut, it will certainly help u

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Next time could you please make the comment a little more positive, he could have done without the first bit of your post, however the second part was actually constructive. Don't sugarcoat, but you could just list some improvements. Thanks. :D