Logo

Suggestions? It's for a music show - hence the note letters.

http://fc06.deviantart.com/fs45/i/20...arkPancake.png

i would have changed the perspective of the letters to match the lines.
Also i'd drop the gothic looking C for somethign that looks smoother and matches the rest of the fonts, if that doesnt work i'd go into illy and edit it just to drop the wavy thing on the side. it looks out of place.

Overall ok, needs more work.

Papa the C thing is apparently a musical note, hence I used it ;o

The C looks fine.

This logo looks great in my opinion. It's a logo, it's not some abstract art. Good work.

The type works, but the "background" doesn't. I'd either change it or lose it - it doesn't add anything right now.

The lines?

Indeed.

What Jeff said. I say, lose it.

I agree with whoever said make the typo fit the perspective of the lines. As it stands right now, the lines feel forced, and don't add anything to the logo. Sure, it's a musical staff, but it's almost detached from the rest of the piece. Flow and consistency is a large part of this piece, and it needs some attention.

Although this may be just a logo, and not abstract art, it is art by definition nevertheless. And IMO, a logo should receive more scrutiny than anything else, because you put alot on the line in terms of expecting a logo to be memorable. Put everything you have into your logos, or it will be just another "generic free" logo.

Maybe just remove the perspective on the scale.

I like it but i don't like the proportion.
Just have a straight paralleled line