Seeing double

tried something new:)



http://img38.imageshack.us/img38/3348/lpcollabcopy.jpg


Stock:http://img38.imageshack.us/img38/4190/metrow.jpg

Amazing Flatty.

Love the shadow on the piller.
Realy nice c4d work as always.

Top stuff.

That's really awesome, took a random stock and made it yours.
Really nice stuff and the shadow is perfect!
Great great great stuff flatty!

Awesome. Colours, lighting and all are really great.
The effects are pretty cool as well. I love the way you put that cartoon and the stock. Really good.
On the left pillar, the reflection doesn't look too good. It just doesn't seem to be in the right proportion to the stock and the other reflection. You could make it thinner(?) so it fits on one flat side of the pillar or just bend the reflection that goes onto the other side so it looks like it is stuck on the surface. The left reflection could also be even a bit taller as on the right pillar, the reflections neck is slightly above the line. You could just make the left one just slightly taller so it kinda looks the same as the reflections would be on the same place on each pillar.

longest post ever.

This is amazing, top work I can't think of anything to critisize. Nice job!

Jorrne, you're riight:p
thx everybody, not even complains on my text?:O xD

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plus. on the right pillar, there's a pipe. Maybe you could get rid of the reflection over it, just to give it a more realistic feel.

damn you're right again:p
not thinking of editing it, maybe l8rxD

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Shadows should be darker (no details in them of course...) and thinner. Nice job though.

it aint shadows:p
it are reflections:)

Ok, I'll be the negative one here :p
It looks decent, but I just don't feel the render as being part of that image. You have a sci-fi-tech stock and an anime style render and I just don't feel like the 2 blend well, I think the render stands out too much.

text definitely needs work too.
I think it was Immortal that used to do the very cool block text on LPs, might want to look into that if you want to use that kind of font/clip mask.

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Originally Posted by Studhorse

Ok, I'll be the negative one here :p
It looks decent, but I just don't feel the render as being part of that image. You have a sci-fi-tech stock and an anime style render and I just don't feel like the 2 blend well, I think the render stands out too much.

text definitely needs work too.
I think it was Immortal that used to do the very cool block text on LPs, might want to look into that if you want to use that kind of font/clip mask.

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instead of pointing out that it looks awesome ill try say something i would like improved :D (not that it looks bad cuz it don't but you know) I think the render still looks a little pasted in, some places it looks way oversharpened wich just add to the pasted on feeling. The reflections on the pillars need to go imo, it doesnt make the scene realistic and only ad different focal areas. You should give her a shadow to make her look less pasted on. I cant find the place she cast shadow?

you're probably right:p
might change it if i'm feeling to ps:)